Pre-school

What every kid thinks on his first day

Pre-School

 

I'm confused when i am woken

earlier than the days before,

i'm dressed up all ice and my hair is brushed

i think "what am I in for?"

 

I'm told I'll make really nice new friends

at this place where i will learn,

confusion erased and excitment arrives

seems like the tables have turned.

 

Because im up ow ad im walking

words i can say a few,

I'm at that age where im invinsible

there's nothing i can't do.

 

My mum gives me a lunch box

and we jump into the car,

We're on our way to pre school

she tells my its not far.

 

we pull into the driveway

but now im not so keen,

i dont want to meet new people

and what if they are mean?

 

we walk towards the building

my mum opens the gate,

but now im in and cant reach the door

there's no way to escape.

 

the kids all stop and stare at me

feels like their glace could peirce my chest.

i get a funny feeling in my lip

and tur to mum cause she knows best.

 

she bends down and reassures me

but still im not conviced,

my eyes fill up with water

and my heart begins to sink.

 

She tells me that she loves me

as she walks towards the door,

my lips will not stop trembling

and my eyes begin to ball.

 

i bet her not to leave me

she just smiles and walks away,

at the exit she turn and whispers

"see you at the end of the day".

 

By now im nearly being sick

while thinking up a plan,

of how to escape this prison

before im attacked by this evil clan.

 

but the gate, i canot reach it

and i dont know where i live

and to get to that door, i have to work up the nerve

to walk past the evil kids.

 

but im getting kind of settled

and im painting with a friend

its his first day here all locked up

he also wants it to end.

 

i know its not much longer

untill mum walks through the door,

and returns me to my castle

the place that i long for.

Reviews

[Barbara Walker]

This is priceless! Once again your rhyme scheme is great! A little stumble over the last line in the first stanza but otherwise, very good flow, rhythm, tone. Your words convey this little guy's feelings perfectly! Kudos! Barbara
P.S. It's a good idea to read over the poem before submitting, to check spelling and typo's.

[youngwriter222]

PreSchool I miss those days. This was very good, describing what little kids think on their first day of school.Like your introduction.

I'm confused when i am woken
earlier than the days before,
i'm dressed up all ice and my hair is brushed
i think "what am I in for?"