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My fourth birthday.

My 4th birthday

 

We've skipped a little while now

to another significant time,

there is streamers, presents and lollies

and all of them are mine.

 

there's children playing party games

and everyone's having fun,

the kids come from my pre-school

i cant find any evil ones.

 

it seems like they turned out ok

they just needed to be given a chance,

tp let them grow on me over time

i've even found romance.

 

But I've only got 2 girlfriends

my best mate he has 4,

but today it is my birthday

so i could probably get 2 more.

 

I sit dow at the table

and dad brings me a cake,

with 4 bright burning candes

and writing on that states.

 

wishing you a happy birthday

on this special day,

and the crowd breaks into chorus

shouting "hip hip, hip hip, horray!".

Reviews

[Barbara Walker]

Again, great rhymes in your biography, really letting us see into the life and mind of little Doh! Great flow, tone and rhythm and I hate to sound like a broken record, but spelling needs checking before submitting:)
Barbara