My lovely Beatrice

A rewrite

(My lovely Beatrice. My muse by the sea.A Poem by Coyote Poetry)

My lovely Beatrice. My muse by the sea.

Beautiful California for us to behold and
we entered into a love for the ages, with one sweet kiss.
A kind angel with broken wings held me close..
The night and the ocean sang a sweet song for us.
“Run from the rules she whispered, freedom is the last dream.”

 
I brought my love closer and inhaled  her perfume with my face in her hair.
Come back here in a year my love she whispered.
Enjoy today my sweet love for tomorrow we will wish for tonight.
Beautiful Beatrice promise me nothing but a chance to love for a moment and a gift of paradise and the utopia of perfect place.

 
Be not afraid she whispered and gave me long and sweet kisses.
Expect dreams to make you cry and later in life. Make you smile.
A moment of perfect love in paradise is better than wishes that were lost and forgotten.
The journey of life is hard and long my love,
remember we danced on a beach and drank sweet wine.
I will whisper your name in sweet dreams and I hope you shall too.
Come closer my love she whispered.
Enter into my soul with sweet words of love.

 
The night was quiet.
Two lovers with new roads and journey separating their hearts in the morning. Held each other till the sky turn to blue.

Coyote
1992

Author's Note

Just words.

Reviews

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Such Romantic and lyrical words my dear friend...no lovelier setting than the California coast with its wildness and purity. Two lovers dancing- Beatrice and her Dante forever, Adam and Eve in the Garden...Eloquent, musical lines so filled with wisdom and tenderness. Risking all for love in the moment-“Run from the rules she whispered, freedom is the last dream. Your muse knows... Brilliant poem.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Annette. I do appreciate the kind words.

[kianatahleigh]

Wow, this is a magnificent piece. It really resonates with actual life experiences and I love that about it.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the kind words. I do appreciate.

[Olivia Danielle]

Beautifully written, this speaks to people who have experienced love before. Very good job.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Olivia for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Mrudula Rani]

" Two lovers with new roads and journey separating their hearts in the morning... " Parting is such sweet sorrow!
All your writings are such an extraordinary emotional journeys. You leave your readers wanting more, John. Thank you for your romantic poems.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Mrudula. I appreciate the comment.

[Jon Roggie]

You know how to write.
The reason I say this Is I can see the scene.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Jon. I appreciate the comment.

[Lavi]

Beautiful words. I love this, and I usually can't read romance because its usually an imitation of it. But this, this is real. It's just beautiful.

- Lavi

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Lavi. I appreciate the comment.

[An owl on the moon]

There is something so magnificent about the ocean that makes loving even more intense, more tender, more wonderful. Our journeys can be so heavy at times, so painful, and so it is beautiful to have moments like these as memories to hold onto. May the music of the ocean rise forever in your song.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Neville]

The duet you so eloquently describe, that sung by the night and the ocean is superb, the messages they convey, that of running from the rules and freedom being the last dream are poetry in themselves.. together, this is wondrous writing my friend and again, I salute you................ Neville

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Neville and I appreciate the comment.

[Neville]

My pleasure entirely ..... Neville