The Sparks of New Life

Basically, you meet a lot more people and the FIRST enemy.

“I have returned” I call into the temple of Airmid. “I am ready to serve Andraste, and except my place as her servant”. The keepers come out and hand me a set of robes, that are a pale glowing gray. A royal blue sash wraps around the right shoulder to the left hip. Octarine leggings are on the bottom of the stack, and a leather belt with swirling blue, gray, and octarine in a glass bead in the middle of the belt. I was about to change when someone stopped me. “You must be accepted by Andraste before you change. Go to the temple of Airmid while we ask favor from the Goddess.” I nod, and head to send my thanks to Airmid when suddenly my way is blocked by two boys in armour. I think nothing of it until I see the Morrigan in between them. I can tell they haven’t spotted me, so I act as if I’m going into some random temple to pray. I happen to be in the temple with trees-Abellio- apple trees to be exact. I pray to him for forgiveness for climbing the sacred apple trees. Then I pray to Andraste to get a message to the Keepers that soldiers are in the realm with the Morrigan or better yet to strike them dead. When a voice as soft as moonlight and as strong as the tides whispers in my mind “Do not worry, my beloved, you have naught to fear from them, they are here for a young girl who escaped their clutches with a dart in her leg, who is a small, dark haired, and brown eyed. This is not you anymore. You are the Moon’s child and look as much, as you will look for the rest of eternity” then the presence in my mind disappears. I sigh in relief and offer a small apple brooch I found outside the temple at the altar to Abellio in thanks for protection. When the scent of sun cooked apples fills the air I know he has heard and accepted my thanks. As I emerge, I see the Keepers walking down the trail, with the bundle in their arms. I walk forwards and hold my hands out for the Clothes before going into a tent and changing. When I emerge, I happen to look into a lake and see my reflection. I have glowing silvery white hair and royal blue eyes, that shimmer occasionally with octarine. When suddenly my reflection is gone and I see the soldiers chasing a young girl who looks exactly the same as Sammy! She sees the temple grounds and darts through the opening in the gates right before it closes for the night. I see her noticing me and grinning before flying into my arms, before she requests to serve Abellio, because of her love for apples. I take her to the Keepers and... don’t see what happens next, because Ice cold water is dumped on my head. I gasp, and glare at the offender. “excuse me but I was gathering information! a young visitor  who is my sister will be joining the service of Abellio. I would get the robes ready” They blink then nod and run off to inform the keepers. I follow at a slower pace before feeling the urge to look up. I follow the urge and see the most majestic moon I’ve ever witnessed in my short life! “It’s a crowning moon” I jump, I hadn't heard him come up. “They say when this moon appears it’s recognizing it’s Ruler walks the earth in mortal form, and the time has come to crown her with the Moon Crown.” he is speaking as if he is half asleep ” They say that She will be renamed Arianrhod in honor of the silver wheel she rules.They tell of the new reign that will bring total peace.” Suddenly he shakes his head and grins “Sorry ‘bout that!” His voice is bubbly and happy now “The Sun god occasionally takes me over to make proclamations, and I have to nicely ask him to leave, I’m Ánrothán, What’s your name?” I look at him “I don’t have one, though they named my sisters.” He stiffens “the one with no name... Andraste please come out and speak with me.” I can’t move. Literally, my body is out of my control! “Ah, Ánrothán, I've finally found you! I would hug you but my little beloved is uncomfortable with hugging strangers. I’d hate for her to leave the temple to soon. I could stop her, But I like having someone with free will. I’ve missed having mortal form, What about you Ánrothán? how long have you had this boy.” I sound like the moon’s reflection in the waves, wavering yet beautiful. The boy - Ánrothán- has a voice like an arrow when he is controlled by the Sun god “Since the Morrigan has appeared, But his parents where under my orders the day he was born to name him this. I hope the Morrigan leaves soon. I don’t want my child to be taken, In fact I’ll have control over his body for however long she is here. I suggest you do the same, My love”. My mind is racing, running hundreds of scenarios through my head, thinking of ways to escape when the words coming out of my mouth scare me “I will do that to, If you would like you may come to a secret room in my temple for us to hide in. It will protect us from her pet’s prying eyes. I’ll let the keepers know” Once she has finished, she leaves my body for a while causing me to collapse from the strain of hosting her. The sun god must have left Ánrothán to because he falls down right next to me. “He has never been totally inside me, it is usually just a small piece of him, telling a story, Expect them back soon” I nod and as I rise suddenly she is back. I apologize my dear but I’ll be controlling you until the Morrigan is gone. I won’t risk my prize again. I sigh. I can’t exactly stop her so I just go along for the ride.

Author's Note

Sorry about the speed! I was rushed for time!

Reviews

[Ferir]

Hmm. Am I right that I see that most of the story is focused on spiritual beliefs and godlike creatures. Correct me, if I am wrong.
Just a bit or a practical advice. Don't write line line line line. Make paragraphs. You gave me a funny hard time to read all of this, because it is a wall of text. xD
Don't worry, this is just a minor thing to worry about. You've got more than that. mwahaha
I just wanted to point out, that you want to write to teach something. I understand that sometimes people like to vent themselves into stories or just write for fun. What you want to do is not rush. Is to think of a lesson, a main theme that is what you want to teach us all. the readers.
Having read this part I have not found anything that could teach me or bring my emotions up. Please, explain this chapter to me if I am terribly wrong.
Good!