Dazzling Luminaries

Ascending sun gives birth to wind.

That gentle breeze upon my skin.

Asks me softly to rise from sleep.

Fizzling stars hold their space,

As a waking sun take their place.

The cadence of day parades by fast.

Soon the sun lays low to rest.

The budding night a bloom of black.

Sets the scene for us to relax.

The waltzing moon begins his dance.

As dazzling luminaries shine overhead.

Reviews

[Tom]

Cosmic celestial creativity, yep, down through the generations us humans from spear n loincloth 'til modern times we are inspired as we look skyward, sun, moon and shining stars, it's all up there and dazzling down, smiling with never a frown ✨😉🎇

[Cherrie Palmer]

Thank you Tom

[jacob erin-cilberto]

nicely penned personified description.
j.

[Cherrie Palmer]

😊Thank you Jacob. I do lean in that direction. I think of the Bible verse that says ... if we don't praise Him the rocks will cry out... and I like to think of nature as silent life that God has made and loves.

[Arundass TP]

Beautiful lines. I loved it.

[Cherrie Palmer]

Thank you 😊 so very much

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Oh wow, I really love this poem. excellent job