Fever

Haiku dedicated to the first day of Spring

 

 

Drowsy branch wakens

Fever springs open grey blinds

Blooming colors burst

Reviews

[PENS FOR PEACE /TJ CALI..]

Just love it!
Your beautiful poem has awaken my spirit to the rites of spring!
Again a wonderful poem from such a brilliant and bright poet!
Well done dear! Your choice of words here shows your artistic cleverness
and shines your poetic brilliance to us all!
Think your poem has given me a case of spring fever!
Another great write!
TIM

[ljc]

Ah, the power and beauty of haiku. I espcially enjoy the first line, what a lovely description.

[Clockwork]

I like the colors that you incorporated into this piece. I think that really helps drive home the message. Spring is a wondrous time of year, it is good to have it back, and this poem is a good one to welcome it with.

[The Chimera]

Hmmm... very interesting. It appears to me as though you're describing the photo from top to photo. Which is quite clever as the thin diagonal line of the branch would draw your eye down like that. Bravo!

[poetic soul]

loved the way you used colours with yo words...lovely...

:) Smiles,
Poetic Soul

[Dionysus Cain]

this is a great read, it made me look out of my window..lol i applaud this write with a standing ovation. i really like this a lot.

[TamiViolet]

I have written many Haiku that haven't, as of yet, been posted. Yours is absolutely perfect, Dani. Presentation, message, personification...so magical.

Title is very creative.

Oh, the beautiful colour and hope of what is yet to come...

[cilla]

The Haiku is often an overlooked form in the poetic world. This is a lush and beautiful example that both soothes and awakens the senses in seventeen well chosen syllables. Beautiful.

[Michael X]

Wow,I love this, the blooming colors burst in the mind with soft ambiance, the sweetness of spring's air
capturing nature in all its gentle, vivid wonder, the imagery is abstract with an original choice of words,
your talent never ceases to amaze the reader

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Certainly a beautiful Haiku reflecting on the most gorgeous, colorful time of year. The picture you chose is perfect. Lovely.