Death

Death

A Chapter by The Reverend, S. D. Blankenship DD. Ph. D.

See I told you no one would miss me, but you didn't

Understand. When I died I saw you you did not cry, though

I told you to miss me, you never did. I took the pill and waited

Changing, trying to heal. I never did. You knew I loved you, for

I told you everyday. Now I burn in hell for you to live so well.

Did you even care about me at all, you never came to stop me

Everyone, but you saw me fall.



© 2012 The Reverend, S. D. Blankenship DD. Ph. D.


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Deep and haunting but realistic feelings. It's like wanting to be a fly on the wall to see the repurcussions. Even though you may feel this person may not mourn, in time, it smacks one in the face. Great expression and your emotions made me almost tear up.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I have read a lot of your work on the "Cafe" and I must tell you I like what you are doing. This pome is no different. I feel it is darker than most of the work I've read but it is REALLY deep. I hope it is not a fad that will capture all your works. I found myself wrap up in one subject and had to stop writing for a while. Never the less it is a well thought out work with many strong points. It has great image anad smooth flow. I love the ending as well. It gave me cause to think about what was going on in the metor of the work. Well done.

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Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hello, you entered this in my contest and im so glad i found it elsewhere because i cannot comment it on the contest form. I just want to say that i love this poem. I like how you encompass the suicidal thought and really show "what they were thinking" when people kill themselves. That and I also adore the acrostic form! a lot of people lose depth when they attempt this form but you captured it perfectly!!!

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Posted 9 Years Ago


Great poem!
I really like it! =)

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Posted 9 Years Ago


This is very good. You expressed the feeling very well.

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Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I think this is such an awesome poem. You can really feel the emotions and sort of empathize with it.

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Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Shawn This's really good. Who ever says you're not good. F**K THEM

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Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I definitely like this; it's a great piece. I have to say, I actually didn't really expect an accrostic, but you definitely did an awesome job with it. The dark/sad atmosphere of it is nice (happiness is overrated... >.>) and I can really feel the feelings radiating off the words.

One tiny thing though. It should be "no" instead of "know" on the first line.

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Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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[WARNING!] The syntax found in this manuscript of S. D. Blankenship's poetry could retain to disordered and/or psychopathic. Comprehend and examine at your own exposed thoughts. A number of words mig.. more..

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