Dying Heart

Dying Heart

A Poem by Desmund Tiny

Both my soul and body are hallow that makes me feel so cold... Under the scarlet sky, I am fading away with this Dying Heart of mine.


Street lights are slowly going down

As if the city itself is going to sleep

I’m just lying here all alone

as the grim stabs my heart so deep


I was like a candle in the middle of a strong storm

The cold wind blow and embrace me with loneliness

All I can hear is the rain hitting the platform

Until my last breath, I am still hopeless


Under the scarlet sky, I am fading away

with this body and soul that are hallow

Another chance is what I pray

but there’s nothing left but a shadow


© 2012 Desmund Tiny

Author's Note

Desmund Tiny
I really don't know why did I write this but it helped me to let go the uneasiness that I have.....regret and losing hope.... waaaahh... (*3*)

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aww.. nice way to let out all those sadness and pain inside you.
such overpowering emotions and darkness enveloping me as i read this piece.. i can feel the intense sadness and hopelessness..
wonderfully done. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago

Nice writing...Your emotions were well expressed here...

Posted 9 Years Ago

I can feel the sadness within. Full of power.
Nice write! Keep writing! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago

I like this! And ha, that's what writing is for. Writing is good for letting out the emotions trapped in ourselves. I hope you are alright.
I love the despair that surrounds this poem though. I can feel the sadness. Great write!
Feel better dear!

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Added on February 5, 2012
Last Updated on February 5, 2012


Desmund Tiny
Desmund Tiny

I just want the name "Desmund Tiny" because it is one of my favorite character in the Novel "Darren Shan" but you can call me Des. ^^, errr.. Hello to my old writings!~ wew it's been years I gues.. more..


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