Dying Heart

Dying Heart

A Poem by Desmund Tiny
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Both my soul and body are hallow that makes me feel so cold... Under the scarlet sky, I am fading away with this Dying Heart of mine.

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Street lights are slowly going down

As if the city itself is going to sleep

I’m just lying here all alone

as the grim stabs my heart so deep

 

I was like a candle in the middle of a strong storm

The cold wind blow and embrace me with loneliness

All I can hear is the rain hitting the platform

Until my last breath, I am still hopeless

 

Under the scarlet sky, I am fading away

with this body and soul that are hallow

Another chance is what I pray

but there’s nothing left but a shadow

 

© 2012 Desmund Tiny


Author's Note

Desmund Tiny
I really don't know why did I write this but it helped me to let go the uneasiness that I have.....regret and losing hope.... waaaahh... (*3*)

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tk
aww.. nice way to let out all those sadness and pain inside you.
such overpowering emotions and darkness enveloping me as i read this piece.. i can feel the intense sadness and hopelessness..
wonderfully done. :)
♥♥♥

Posted 9 Years Ago


Nice writing...Your emotions were well expressed here...


Posted 9 Years Ago


I can feel the sadness within. Full of power.
Nice write! Keep writing! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


I like this! And ha, that's what writing is for. Writing is good for letting out the emotions trapped in ourselves. I hope you are alright.
I love the despair that surrounds this poem though. I can feel the sadness. Great write!
Feel better dear!

Posted 9 Years Ago



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I just want the name "Desmund Tiny" because it is one of my favorite character in the Novel "Darren Shan" but you can call me Des. ^^, errr.. Hello to my old writings!~ wew it's been years I gues.. more..

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