Far from 1955

Far from 1955

A Poem by Oswald Chesterfield Cobblepot

 From Judge Doom to Doc Brown, he changed our lives
   Going forward in time in style
 And trying to kill Eddie Valiant was fun for awhile 
    Away in the sunset his Time traveling train drives

  Turning into a Teen-Wolf was not his best
    But being the little mouse made all children laugh and cry
 Now he shivers and shakes, putting a tear in my eye
   But being on Family Ties was his great quest

    These men, you may not know
  If you do, your childhood was great
    Watching their movies with the family just to stay up late
These two actors you see, showed me to always look for a bright tomorrow.

  

© 2014 Oswald Chesterfield Cobblepot


Author's Note

Oswald Chesterfield Cobblepot
This poem goes out to two of the greatest actors of my childhood. This ones to you Doc and Marty, may you live in the hearts of people forever and always.

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Of course, Christopher Lloyd and Michael J. Fox, also two of my favorite actors and one of my favorite series of movies. They did lift my spirits and deserve a poetic tribute. I guess you must have taken Margo's advice, which was good. Otherwise this is very nice.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oswald Chesterfield Cobblepot

10 Years Ago

FINALLY someone who loves them as much as I do lol. They are such great actors, I was wanting to men.. read more



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Creative I like how you connect it to child hood memories personally I grew up with Sabrina the teenage witch Halloween Harry potter and rugrats you have great structure and punctuation it enjoyed this poem

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kamari's

10 Years Ago

Now I have to say an awesome actor I love was the guy in liar liar fantastic movie an I did enjoy it.. read more
Oswald Chesterfield Cobblepot

10 Years Ago

lol Jim Carey, I loved him in the mask >X< and ok :D
Kamari's

10 Years Ago

Who didn't love the mask I sometimes think he's in movies I like because he's always been in my lik.. read more
Of course, Christopher Lloyd and Michael J. Fox, also two of my favorite actors and one of my favorite series of movies. They did lift my spirits and deserve a poetic tribute. I guess you must have taken Margo's advice, which was good. Otherwise this is very nice.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oswald Chesterfield Cobblepot

10 Years Ago

FINALLY someone who loves them as much as I do lol. They are such great actors, I was wanting to men.. read more
I enjoyed it and I to am fans of the authors you speak of and truly agree whole heartedly with margo seuss.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sorry I misspoke there. I have heard of back to the future. woops.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Yeah, I've never `seen` of one of the people you mentioned before (doc). I personnally did not connect with this writing. As you can see in my writing I express differently.In my opinion I think you should continue expressing your in depth emotions. Sadness/pain/happiness. Things of that nature. Express your deepest desires and heartache. I think that's the most beautiful a person can be. It shows they are human.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oswald Chesterfield Cobblepot

10 Years Ago

I know you do :) I dont take it personal
Tatiana Casali

10 Years Ago

Message me love
Oswald Chesterfield Cobblepot

10 Years Ago

I did ^*^ :)
Amazing write Jokerboy16 :-)

Kaze~ :-)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oswald Chesterfield Cobblepot

10 Years Ago

Thank chu Kaze ^*^ I'm gad you liked it
&#9812; CrownedDevil &#9790;

10 Years Ago

It was my pleasure. :-)
Unfortunatley, I live in a box and am unfamiliar with these actors....but I can tell by reading this piece that you certainly enjoyed them.

I have a few contructive critisisms for you. First one is a mere typo in the last stanza of your second line. The second 'you' should be 'your.' I'm also not sure about the know and tomorrow ryhme..tomorrow doesn't have two m's. Haha! :) I just don't know about the flow of the last stanza. Give it some thought!! Read and re-read!! Write and re-write!! And if you get stuck, take a break! I once took a 3 year break from one of my works!!!! If you ask me, a piece of writing is never done!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oswald Chesterfield Cobblepot

10 Years Ago

Thank you for the critisism :) I understand too, I'll go fix it :)
I love Back to the Future. This is a lovely tribute.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oswald Chesterfield Cobblepot

10 Years Ago

Thank you :) I was crying a little when I wrote it lol, I mean, I grew up with these guys :)

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