Riddle A

Tried my first real riddle (the 3rd h riddle, the first i've written, can't be guessed by anyone not belonging to my english class), try to guess it :) !!

My name starts with C,

Women get joyful when me they see,

They scream cheerfully on Valentine's day,

When their fair boyfriends give me to them,

I may be black, i may be white,

But i always cause my owner's delight,

Some girls can't stand me, some boys instead want me,

They give me no mercy, they swallow me,

I melt in their mouths slowly,

My sweet taste spreads quickly,

Guess what's my name,

That's this riddle's aim.

Author's Note

If you got an innuendo answer, don't worry, you're not a pervert, i've made it on purpose, wanna see how many innocent minds are still out there, so if you didn't find it, please tell me :)
Rhyme scheme is: AABCDDEEFFGG
The answer is ... chocolate :)

Reviews

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Haha this is hilarious. I was actually clueless on what it could be:P Then I saw your author's note and saw that the answer is chocolate. So I went and re-read it and it all made sense. Hehe outstanding job. I loved the rhyme scheme by the way :)


Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Cute riddle... and delicious. I can see how there is innocence and yet sexiness to it. Good job.

[The Pain Stays Fresh]

This is too cute!! It describes chocalate perfectly. Love it!

[Leslie Philibert]

This is a fine, funny poem, and I admire people who have a multi-lingual background and write poetry, good work.

[Coyote Poetry]

The magic of chocolate. Some people love their chocolate more then their mate. A very good riddle. Thank you for the riddle.
Coyote

[MOON]

Ode to chocolate , lovely!

[BatFan38]

loved this. very funny.

[Thea]

Wah! I was right, haha! I guessed chocolate at first until I read the author's note. XD
This was really entertaining. Great one!
:)))

[CourtneyShay]

love it and its chocolate

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

I like your poetic riddle. Your name is Chocolate. Very nice.