Riddle A

Riddle A

A Poem by 外人 (Gaijin)
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Tried my first real riddle (the 3rd h riddle, the first i've written, can't be guessed by anyone not belonging to my english class), try to guess it :) !!

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My name starts with C,
Women get joyful when me they see,
They scream cheerfully on Valentine's day,
When their fair boyfriends give me to them,
I may be black, i may be white,
But i always cause my owner's delight,
Some girls can't stand me, some boys instead want me,
They give me no mercy, they swallow me,
I melt in their mouths slowly,
My sweet taste spreads quickly,
Guess what's my name,
That's this riddle's aim.

© 2012 外人 (Gaijin)


Author's Note

外人 (Gaijin)
If you got an innuendo answer, don't worry, you're not a pervert, i've made it on purpose, wanna see how many innocent minds are still out there, so if you didn't find it, please tell me :)
Rhyme scheme is: AABCDDEEFFGG
The answer is ... chocolate :)

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Haha this is hilarious. I was actually clueless on what it could be:P Then I saw your author's note and saw that the answer is chocolate. So I went and re-read it and it all made sense. Hehe outstanding job. I loved the rhyme scheme by the way :)


Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Cute riddle... and delicious. I can see how there is innocence and yet sexiness to it. Good job.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is too cute!! It describes chocalate perfectly. Love it!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a fine, funny poem, and I admire people who have a multi-lingual background and write poetry, good work.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The magic of chocolate. Some people love their chocolate more then their mate. A very good riddle. Thank you for the riddle.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ode to chocolate , lovely!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

loved this. very funny.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wah! I was right, haha! I guessed chocolate at first until I read the author's note. XD
This was really entertaining. Great one!
:)))

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Haha this is hilarious. I was actually clueless on what it could be:P Then I saw your author's note and saw that the answer is chocolate. So I went and re-read it and it all made sense. Hehe outstanding job. I loved the rhyme scheme by the way :)


Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

love it and its chocolate

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like your poetic riddle. Your name is Chocolate. Very nice.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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外人 (Gaijin)
外人 (Gaijin)

London, United Kingdom



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