i Want

i Want

A Poem by Einstein Noodle

“There is an ocean in the middle of the forest.” “Say what, now?” “An ocean! In the Forest, right in front of you! See? There’s a whale! A whale!” “Oh wow,”

i Want
i want your eyes to speak as
hands that grace lilting southern magnolias ...a
tensile tenuto .... a
leaving of finger tips  stars tracing
i want
hot cocoa and ground red pepper
your hair alive with
emeralds  streaming seaside pearls
that sacred place
i want 
breath to my life 
and drinking
each from one dawn to another
impaling our thoughts ..........a
soul quenching,  wanting  thirst 
i want you.
E.
11/29/2019

© 2019 Einstein Noodle


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I really like the way you mix ideas here. The sensual alongside symbols of comfort. The emeralds and hot cocoa (albeit spicy :D). These juxtapositions speak to me of a greater depth than just a physical want. The soul wanting another soul intertwined with it perhaps.

Sometimes it’s not possible to get close enough. There are distances even in closeness that make it difficult to feel a complete sense of satisfaction.

But your poem reaches. That tenuto is inspired. What a lovely way of thinking about it. Musicality and stopping time to hold on. At least that’s how it shakes out in my head.

This is lovely work, E. Love and desire do create beautiful landscapes in the head-heart. When we step back and let them speak without fear.

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

your review hits every note Ellis .. i am blessed this reached you in all the ways it should .. than.. read more
Eilis

1 Year Ago

I look forward to reading your take on the idea, perhaps. You’re very welcome, E.



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That PIC is a sweet one!

I think you found and touched an ultimate "reach" ...that one taste you get and thereafter you not ever forget. Some walk from the "table" and for whatever reason can't come back to it for another ...but they live with the afters taste echoing behind their eyes.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

isn't that a great pic!!! yeah .. sometimes in these matters we can't find our way back :( and the l.. read more
A desirous longing just like an insatiable thirst that only a returning lover can quaff and extinguish the burning fire, beautifully penned with an alluring, artistic and acoustic theme 🥇

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

Thanks Tom! glad you felt it all .. :) Happy and Merry Christmas to ya! I appreciate your reading an.. read more
This ticks all the boxes of sensuality flows like hot cocoa and makes you want more.
Great picture too, might actually be borrowing some of it.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

thanks Paul .. your words are encouraging .. i don't do a lot of these kinds of poems ... and yes! i.. read more
Paul Bell

1 Year Ago

Sure is, the picture just looks so iconic.
Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

:) ........................
well that is very luscious ...

the deep desire translating to another, oh and then the bounce back to be enjoyed. It's like the early meeting where in the relationship one can only see the richness, can only taste the what's to come through one's own imaginings - then and only then if the desire becomes 'touchable' well then we can experience a few moments of pure bliss.

You know I was drinking and Ecuadorian hot chocolate today - oh my goodness how good it was - that is where my mind shot when I read hot cocoa :D

hello you ... sending love X

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

I really like the way you mix ideas here. The sensual alongside symbols of comfort. The emeralds and hot cocoa (albeit spicy :D). These juxtapositions speak to me of a greater depth than just a physical want. The soul wanting another soul intertwined with it perhaps.

Sometimes it’s not possible to get close enough. There are distances even in closeness that make it difficult to feel a complete sense of satisfaction.

But your poem reaches. That tenuto is inspired. What a lovely way of thinking about it. Musicality and stopping time to hold on. At least that’s how it shakes out in my head.

This is lovely work, E. Love and desire do create beautiful landscapes in the head-heart. When we step back and let them speak without fear.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

your review hits every note Ellis .. i am blessed this reached you in all the ways it should .. than.. read more
Eilis

1 Year Ago

I look forward to reading your take on the idea, perhaps. You’re very welcome, E.
This is what poetry should be. Should make the reader feel and understand every word. I felt the appreciate and need in the words. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

Coyote! coming from a romantic such as yourself i could not be happier ... you have made me day this.. read more
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

A wonderful poem and you are welcome my friend.
This is a killer poem with a ton of sensory and sensuality. Your imagery is as gentle as one would hope that another person's touch could always be! These are timeless sentiments & I envy those who've had a love attraction that felt as amazing as this & also long-lasting! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

luv ya Barley girl ... your visits always bless and inspire me ... its a dream eh!? ..and lasts as l.. read more
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wow! Oh my goodness me. This is so sensual and beautiful, they sound absolutely intoxicated by each other, verging on the lines of obsession but who would mind consumption if it's as gorgeous as this!? Fantastic choice of image too. Huge fan!
Laura.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

thank you so much Laura ... so happy you "feel" this one ... couldn't ask for more .. thanks you
Wow! ' lilting southern magnolias ' yay that pleased my flower lover heart as you muse and describe your love so poetically in exquisite word choice. Kudos and I'm super glad I spotted this on my reading tours,

Pls pleez do review/ comment/ add your thoughts on my newest poem too

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

I have noticed your avatar here and there and only this morning said to me self ... i should go knoc.. read more
Superb romantic write, E:) So many fabulous turns of phrase.

"your hair alive with
emeralds streaming seaside pearls
that sacred place"

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

thank Pryde .. glad you enjoyed this little ride of romance ;) not surprised the "sacred" touch you .. read more

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