Cursing the Winds

you're the devil
In my details
darker than my heart.
I'm your night angel stealing
a lone soul in the dark..
asking for naught...
not a thing have I to gain..
I curse the wicked winds
which keep whispering your name..

Reviews

[PaintedBirdy]

sorry for my interpretation presented below. i liked this :)

the word "you're" implies an other, therefore a relationship, particularly with a devil, or an antagonist. "in my details" suggests the other could be one's self-consciousness and self-critique. to battle this the narrator becomes an angel, who's tool is ironically cursing. the narrator doesn't want anything but to lose this devil or devilling thoughts. the "wicked winds" are the damn thoughts that keep blowing in. i'm quite curious what the name actually is.

thanks for sharing!

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Mondaine for your words and thoughts on my poetry..ever so appreciated;

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing use of words. A complete story in your words. Left the reader with the desire to read and know more. Thank you dear Fran for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Karmee]

WOW!!! So very awesome, much enjoyed this write

[John the Baptist]

Sounds like a case of someone hung up on someone else. If bad vibes persist, tell the winds to shut up.

[Fran Marie]

haha..yeah I will...thanks John so vey much ..I appreciate your words on my poem;

[jacob erin-cilberto]

memories...waking alone, the wind's whisper sounding like his whispers in the night.
her heart he stole..and now she still hears and feels him close even in her solitude.
haunting write, Fran,
j.

[Fran Marie]

yes..kind of like that..thanks Jacob ever so much for your words..I appreciate;