Just Getting Started

'Comments' Poetry... because of Writerski7.

Smooth

 

You changed my life…

and then you changed it back.

 

Smooth move.

 

 

Hey Girls

 

Stop getting boyfriends.

It makes it really difficult to hit on you.

Wait until I’m dating one of you,

and then carry on.

 

 

Reiterate

 

Sometimes I'll hear a song

I used to hate,

and think to myself, "Wow,

this really makes me wanna stab myself in the ear.

Still."

 

 

Sunrise

 

So, I was watching the sunrise,

and it dawned on me.

 

 

To Those It May Concern

 

Be polite and tip pizza delivery drivers well…

They know where you live.

Author's Note

Grain of salt, my friends.

Reviews

[deadly healer]

i was laughing the whole time i was reading this as well. i thought the girl part was kinda funny. and it is true that pizza delivery guys do know where you live. lol. i adored this poem. hardly anything makes me laugh anymore and you proved that i actully can still laugh. thanks for that btw. i love your work. its cool to have a break from all the stress for once and be able to read this hilarious stuff. keep writing dude. ur awesome.

[Mark]

=)

[Sabbath_Nikole]

hahahahaha love that last one. Pretty freaking hilarious. Interesting tidbits. Not sure how they all fit together, but i dig it, it's like life. Random s**t comes together for no apparent reason at all. suh-weet.

[Rain Kissed Secret]

I was smirking the whole time. Very clever.

[Adora.xo]

Lol, nice. I loved the last one! They know where I live haha. Good thing I tip em well... I think. Good job hunn! Wonderful piece... pieces? e.e


~Adora

[WriterSki7]

Define the term "Because of Writerski7" . . . ah; I see.

Lol this dose of comedy was well-appreciated. You are truly capable of understand it's the simple things in life that often hold the greatest value. At least, that's the impression I get from these little comments. Still; your work is much appreciated (by me at the very least). I shall expect Volume 2 with a large dose of anticipation, aned appreciation.

[JENY]

Hi….I liked it…
Witty and terse…effective too….

[Annette Jay Sweeney]

I really like this! Hmmm I may copy myself and have to write little comments of my own. Smooth and To Those It May Concern are my favorites. I like Smooth because of how simple, yet witty the comeback is. And To Those It May Concern because pizza delivery people always get shafted.

[Kazian]

i find it funny (not trying to be mean) also i like "Smooth", very creative.

[Star Wolf]

Different and really good.