Stranger In The Night

Inspired by a poem that Infinity's Shadow wrote, so if you like it go check out his poem!!! It's Called Drifting Darkness and it's amazing!!

 

His eyes took mercy on me

While I cried in the darkness of the night

bruises take away my appeal

No man will want me tonight

 

This man took pity on me

My eyes red with tears

He asked me who

I simply pointed, he gave me an adieu

 

His eyes darkened in the moonlight

As he walked into the door

To hear a grown man shriek and cry

Made me more than a simple w***e

Reviews

[Wolfwind Words]

I loved this! It was like hearing my own imagination from a mirror reflection. Showing the chivilry of a man, as he takes in the girls pain and defends her honor.

The stanzas perfectly set with discription exploding this moment in time into the readers mind; like a movie on a screen.

Great Write!
Eternally Your's
Infinity's Shadow

[Eslynn]

"To hear a grown man shriek and cry made me more than a simple w***e"... gorgeous line, darling! This was very interesting, and the first thought was OMG VAMPIRES! :D

[SM Davis]

Call me insane, but the first thought that occurred to me when I read this was a woman who was fortunate enough to escape Jack the Ripper. Don't ask me where that came from...I have no idea but it was such a strong image while reading this poem.

I loved it.

[Annalisa]

...wow... This is so horribly honest and painfully vulnerable... This... I can't think of much more than wow... I'm stealing this for my favorites list. This is amazing.

[An owl on the moon]

Such a brutal beauty about this piece, holding the depth of a soul deep within it. An amazingly complex writing, with a seemingly soft veneer. Brilliant!!!!