Survive

The Animal Within.

"Are You Ready?

 Just Let Your Heart Beat.

 Ignite With Fire.

 Here Its Your Desire.

 Bleed For Me.

 Just Run To See.

 Look Behind You.

 Cause Now I Changed To.

 Its All About The Inner Monster.

 But Its Ok You Don't Have To Bother.

 I'm Just Your Souls Reaver. 

 Now I'm Your Temptations Retriever.

 Whisper My Secrets You Know In Mind.

 Now Don't You Wish For This To Rewind.

 Here In Eternity With Me I'm Spellbind.

 As The Moon Light Makes Me Remind. 

 Of So It Is To Be Refined.

 For This Darkside Of Mine Is Unkind.

 The Sun And Moon Are Unlined.

 So That Means You're About To Be Mine.

 No Time To Catch Your Breath.

 Just A Sentence With Your Death.

 The Beast Within Is Breaking Out.

 Just Scream Out O' Hell With A Shout.

 In This Horror There Is No Timeout.

 Just Take Any Route.

 Just Your Soul Is The Payout.

 But We Both Know How It Will Turnout.

 Listen To Your Heart Beat.

 There Is No Defeat.

 Just A Sweet Piece Of Meat.

 You're About To Become My Treat.

 My Primal Rage Is No Longer In A Cage.

 There Is No Kill Switch To Engage.

 But In The Meantime.

 Its A Lifetime Of My Deadly Playtime.

 Keep Running Through The Park.

 Let Them All Look As They Hear My Loud Bark.

 Death Is About To Embark.

 For I'm The Werewolf That Will Leave My Bite Mark.

 If I Die Then You Will Become The Hunter.

 As Your Old Life Will Asunder.

 You Might Just Start To Lose Your Mind As You Wounder.

 Now Your Heart Has A Splinter.

 Just Take A Walk Into Fate With A Dive.

 Its Ok You Won't Die Easily You Have The Ability To Revive.

 Smell The Blood That Turns Your Veins On Fire As The Kill You Thrive.

 But Under The Moonlight Of Darkness How Will You Survive?" 

 

Reviews

[The Exception]

Outstanding. Not just because you've managed to rhyme that awesome but because it's like you get bitten. It's just a thrilling theme and your feel your heart beat just alittle faster the longer you read.

[A. Fischer]

I typically shy away from reviewing "fantasy" writes, although you do a very excellent job at pulling the reader in.....Nice job!

[KAREN]

Love the flow and ryhme!
"Are You Ready?
Just Let Your Heart Beat.
makes you want to read futher to see what happens next!

[Rafif]

Awesome rhymes, this poem could be lyrics.
The Beast Within Is Breaking Out.
Just Scream Out Hell With A Shout.
My fav. lines.

[Cherrie Palmer]

this poem reveals your story very well ...Just Take Walk Into Fate With A Dive... that line is a good play on words