I Forget You Are "Hers"

When I look into your eyes,

I almost start to believe your lies.

When the words flow form your lips,

The wall around my heart starts to slip.

When I feel a simple touch,

I almost need a crutch

When you smile that smile,

My heart almost stops for a while.

And when our fingers interwine,

I forget that you are hers and not mine......

 

 

 

Author's Note

We are all tempted

Reviews

[AWickedMoon]

Love the word choices in this piece. :)

[SimpleMind]

I know the feeling :(

[Country Girl]

I know what ya mean, and this is great.!!!

[Blue Ivory]

Yeah I completely know what you mean here. I'm a victim of that :P You have serious writing skills, by the way :)

[Racy Daniel]

Creative writing.

[Nick M.]

Wow this is really good!

[ROSALIND]

I love the flow of your words thought provoking

[Krista Weiss]

Wow! Great poem!! :)

[Michael Thrower]

"When the words flow form your lips," Do you mean "From"? Other than that, good job. It's like a small sad romance.

[beautiful dreamer]

nicely done