Whispers

Just a poem I got from a little inspiration

Find me a word

Heed my call

Songs from a bird

Waiting on the wall

 

Can you hear me?

Can you not?

Please my angel

Don’t fear the dark

 

Nay the bee

Calm the trees

The Willow’s whisper

Your sweet kiss

 

Come to me

My dark eyed maiden

Play me you

Sweetened cadence

 

Take my hand

And follow me

While we rest

In the sea

Author's Note

I want you honest opinions

Reviews

[deeps]

This is a wonderful write here.
I really enjoyed this.
Amazing flow and rhyme.

[The Water Queen]

A very peaceful and poetic poem. It Rhymes most of the time and the form is great. Great job.

[Tara♥Undefined&h..]

I didn't see anything that I could possibly say was wrong with this. it was really cute although it seemed a little choppy,but i enjoyed it that way. It was realy good. Thanks for sharing.

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a great poem. The imagery is beautifully portrayed and the flow of the poem is easy to follow.

[ashley]

I like this, it's sweet. Made me smile. Great job! :D

[H-Jonesy]

wonderful as usual!!!

[DeathByChoice]

AW! This is so good! And sweet! Not the silly serious stuff either, just a nice poem