Glass Life

The glass is half empty

or the glass is half full

no matter how you look at it

life is f*****g bull.

 

No matter who you are

your time will surly come,

no matter if you're rich or poor

or a homeless bum.

 

Death will come to all

to all that wait around,

so I will not wait till then

I'll leave myself unfound.

 

I will not feel the pain I've felt

or see the s**t I've seen,

I don't care if people hate me

cause I'm not sorry for who I've been.

Reviews

[Katie]

This was a great message, I agree with Theresa though- you should never apologize for who you are. Loved it.

[Theresa]

You should never be sorry for who you are well unless you are a ruthless killer but I'm positive thats not the case. Sometimes life sucks but tomorrow brings another day. I kind of feel the ending has hope. Nicely done.

[Kayla_May]

phenomonal! i really like this one

[Chelsea.]

Nice work. You shouldnt be sorry for who are are.

[*Evelen*]

Very powerful and full of meaning. I absolutely love the final line. Never be sorry for who you are. Well done=)

[Liz Alexander]

That amazing! Love it

[Fallacy Pharmacy]

Ahhh, I like this :D Very true, a good poem....

[Aimee Mahathy]

Wow, at first I was like "wtf? This poems is painfully depressing!" but the end, very very nice! That final line, I think is something we all need to learn~
Great job!

[Felicity Winter]

Very true, great message.

[Alz Alz]

Great rhyme, good message. I think you spelled surely wrong... it's surely not surly. lol. anyway. i'm a sucker for rhyme, good job.