Swollen With Love

Well excuse me

I have love indigestion

My stomach is swollen

And I'm farting rainbows

I ate too much love

My core is expanded

Inflammed with passion

My joints hurt

I have too much fire

So I took a little antacid

Indifference in pill form

No more feeling

But at least I'm not feeling

pain

And so I sleep lonely

But comfortable

The darkness and silence

Tranquil

As my body finally evacuated

The love poisoning

Reviews

[Bárbara Conte]

Very funny and well did! I loved!

[Baby Ricochet]

Ha! Funny stuff! Good one.

[Rita L. Sev]

Haven't farted rainbows in awhile... a bit of silly mingled with emotion - great balance. Enjoyed this.

[Frieda P]

Since I just ate lunch it's a bit of stomach turner, but pretty funny too! Where does one pick up 'indifference' in pill form by the way? :)

[wordman]

love indigestion I have never heard that phrase great write

[Pryde Foltz]

Well excuse me
I have love indigestion
My stomach is swollen
And I'm farting rainbows

OMG … that is brilliant. So, so, so funny.

[Luke L]

thank you very much, thought you'd enjoy it :)