Pearls

Pearls of life lying on the ocean floor

winds of change and tears that from my eyes fall

 say you love me when the savage  wind calls

wake me from the sorrow of ice cold shores

 

dreaming  I have walked with you at my side

waltzing in time holding touching the sky

sometimes a fall  yet we would always glide

Beyond the grey misery we would fly  

 

dwelling in paradise adorned with gems

 stone worn by  kings blunting a poison pen

The past is gone and the future is when

we still the pain, bleeding hearts and then

 

life will find us on the dark ocean floor

life will find us bringing us to the shore

Reviews

The pearls of life, meanwhile pearl through the many years on the deep and darken seabed, But the end is in sight ... There are miracles ... I feel the positivity in your ending, beautiful moon. The structure too. It has a special touch...

Lovely.

E.L.

[ewest1220]

Beautiful... just beautiful! Great job!

[anne p. murray- LadeeAn..]

Each of us, learns valuable lessons and memorable insight as we travel life’s path. The “ah ha” moments that shape our character and change our lives. Sometimes these pearls of wisdom result in gigantic corrections in our lives, moving us forward on our own personal journeys.

"The past is gone and the future is when
we still the pain, bleeding hearts and then
life will find us on the dark ocean floor
life will find us bringing us to the shore"

Very passionate and uplifting words to end your pearls of wisdom journey

[Dr. Wood ?]

what can i say.....PURE POETRY

[Kes]

This is a fantastic poem. The last two lines are beautiful. It's so rhythmic; it's very songlike.
Great work!
K

[Freedom's Child]

This poem comes together very well flows perfectly. The I like the glimpses of hope mixed with the sadness. "kings blunting a poison pen" speaks on many levels and is a great line. The poem seems to have personal battles as well as the battles society is fighting. Awesome job!

[An owl on the moon]

Life is filled with light and shadow, and you've confessed this so beautifully... tenderly... that longing to go to the depths and to be reborn in a way... A dark dance on the ocean floor and a longing for more..

[Eloha]

A lovely cadence Moon! I also recently wrote as if a bout pearls...

[Shalini Dinesh (Poet's ..]

Absolutely fantastic poem, I just loved reading it, and I mean it.

[Priscilla Sayers]

A heart felt piece. A broken heart the mingles in optimism. My kind of sorrow, one that ends in strength. Wonderfully expressed!

[Yellow Butterfly]

Look closely at the oysters shell it bears the beautiful and exquisite hall marks of a life that has stood the test of time..... bearing the "Pearls of life" as mother nature intended.

Very nicely penned :O)