Remember Frieda

Remember Frieda

A Poem by Neville
"

I will leave it entirely up to you, at least for the time being.................

"

Remember Frieda


Why does she no longer submit fresh words here for us to consider

Why does she no longer leave a trace of herself   

behind     

I suspect because you frightened her

 away  

Just like you have so many

 others

Do you remember  

Frieda

?

 

 

© 2017 Neville


Author's Note

Neville
Not everyone here will understand or appreciate these words, but many of you will & of course, then there's you. We both know who you are

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Yes, absolutely miss her and always will. She was my writing mentor, my spirit lifter - plus, we even had our own form of Italian! She was my extra sister - and always will be. I went to Puglia to see where her history laid.. tis an incredible place with extraordinary 'architecture'! And so was she extraordinary.

Your words are a tribute, Neville, as well as a reminder that we have had special people as well as villains in this Cafe's history. Many thanks for sharing.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

emmajoygreen

7 Months Ago

Would it be misunderstood to say I loved that dear woman. I think we shared something neither of us .. read more
Neville

7 Months Ago


folk will be folk and far too often only see what they choose to see, or hear what they are .. read more
emmajoygreen

7 Months Ago

You are so right! Those self-selected thoughts are like confetti, they spread their nothings to n.. read more



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mou
I heard the name of the poetess and perhaps I knew her too. I took breaks from wc often, and probably that's why the journey is not so vivid to me. She must be a beautiful soul. If she left the Cafe due to troll, then it is very sad. Only one thing I wanna ask: Do the people of wc still stand for the ones who are the victims of these dirty practices in this Cafe? I guess, no / not everyone does stand. How sad that we're missing wonderful people but remain silent (or keep the vigilant eyes or allowing troll with silence or provoking it with 'subtlety') when these things repeat here. Thank you, Neville that you consider the issue and put some genuine words and concern here.
- mou

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

7 Months Ago


Thank you for stopping by and pulling in to consider this oldie mou .. Frieda was indeed a b.. read more
Yes, absolutely miss her and always will. She was my writing mentor, my spirit lifter - plus, we even had our own form of Italian! She was my extra sister - and always will be. I went to Puglia to see where her history laid.. tis an incredible place with extraordinary 'architecture'! And so was she extraordinary.

Your words are a tribute, Neville, as well as a reminder that we have had special people as well as villains in this Cafe's history. Many thanks for sharing.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

emmajoygreen

7 Months Ago

Would it be misunderstood to say I loved that dear woman. I think we shared something neither of us .. read more
Neville

7 Months Ago


folk will be folk and far too often only see what they choose to see, or hear what they are .. read more
emmajoygreen

7 Months Ago

You are so right! Those self-selected thoughts are like confetti, they spread their nothings to n.. read more
Frieda May have been before my time, Neville but we have all made friends and lost friends to the trolls. Sorely missed, I could name a few. Nice write Nev.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

7 Months Ago


can you elaborate .. p.m if necessary ..
andrew mitchell

7 Months Ago

I miss Barleygirl and sereenaoutloud, FT Ledgrew Lynn, and a few others, Neville. I've had my run-in.. read more
Neville

7 Months Ago


Be sure you are not the only one to have been serially blocked and for no apparent reason An.. read more
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I had messaged Frieda few months ago regarding her come back to writerscafe but received no reply....I can no way declare a certain reason of Frieda's closed account....none of us can I guess except Frieda...
It's a pleasure to have you write upon the matter of her absence here...May she becomes active here again, soon!
Many thanks for sharing this one....Be blessed :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

Bless You my friend for taking the time and trouble to comment here.. it is much appreciated.. mysel.. read more
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5 Years Ago

Ameen.... :)
Neville

5 Years Ago

Yes indeed.... Amen.... :)
Neville, from title to parting thoughts this is worth discovering, and maybe a lesson of kindness for those who will see.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

yes.. to quote that famous song.. I got you and you got me babe x
Cherrie Palmer

5 Years Ago

Lol now there's a couple I don't hear quoted every day. :)
Neville

5 Years Ago

............ :) N
What I enjoyed most about Freida was her endless array of poetical brilliance, her originality in literally everything she wrote, whether it was a poem, a comment, or a review, how her vibrant personality, and quick wit always shined through.
Among her works my favorites were the surprisingly impacting Haiku and Senryu like no one else's … for instance:

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Quickie Coffee Kisses Senryu
A Poem by Frieda P


Coffee & Kisses

hit & run, morning delight

caffeinated sex


© 2014 Frieda P

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

LOLOL … simply fantastic!
She could have stayed; we'd have crushed the troll for her, but her soft heart didn't know, I guess. :,(

Good write, Neville … miss her so! ⁓ Richard

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

I think you just hit the nail on its proverbial head sir.. many thank you's for visiting and gracing.. read more
:(((((((((((((((((((((((((((((( a dear, spirited, Italian firecracker ... i sure do miss her Neville!! thank you for this tribute to her ...
E.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

Bless ya bruvva .. I just knew it wouldn't take ya long to get here... Cheers Gene, take care and st.. read more
I am quite new and so don't know who Frieda is but your poem is lovely and indicates that she must have been a really wonderful writer and a sweet friend. I really liked the lines- I suspect because you frightened her away .Just like you have so many others. It's so true that the troller's do both discourage and frighten a writer and need to learn to appreciate others. I really wish I could have read some of her works.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

what an unexpected but very sweet comment you have left here my friend.. yes, she was kinda special... read more
Anjeline

5 Years Ago

You're welcome:) and I hope we all find her profile and tell her how badly she is missed
Neville

5 Years Ago

Frieda's profile remains closed.. I mean the troll is still here..
I remember Frieda. Always kind to me. A kind and wonderful friend. Thank you Neville for the reminder of a friend.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

I knew you would John & thank you my brother.. Neville
Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

You are welcome Neville.
Neville

5 Years Ago

........ cheers John :)
Yes I do indeed remember her and sadly so many leave, often because of trolls.
Maybe she will return. Maybe she already has. :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

thank you Ana.... I often wonder that myself :)

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