Remember Frieda

Remember Frieda

A Poem by Neville
"

I will leave it entirely up to you, at least for the time being.................

"

Remember Frieda


Why does she no longer submit fresh words here for us to consider

Why does she no longer leave a trace of herself   

behind     

I suspect because you frightened her

 away  

Just like you have so many

 others

Do you remember  

Frieda

?

 

 

© 2017 Neville


Author's Note

Neville
Not everyone here will understand or appreciate these words, but many of you will & of course, then there's you. We both know who you are

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Neville, I never knew Frieda, but I have heard from others here how sorely she is missed. If she left because of another, that is so sad to learn. It is wonderful that you are thinking of her today and I am sure you will get many visitors here who will second that. All good wishes for you
dear Neville.


Chris


Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago

thank you my good friend & true

N



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Frieda May have been before my time, Neville but we have all made friends and lost friends to the trolls. Sorely missed, I could name a few. Nice write Nev.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago

tis most true sir... c'mon andrew. spill da beans why don'tcha... maybe naming and shaming should be.. read more
Neville

1 Year Ago

I bet if I put a name up... dozens would stand in my corner... oh' I am sorely tempted.. and I mean .. read more
I had messaged Frieda few months ago regarding her come back to writerscafe but received no reply....I can no way declare a certain reason of Frieda's closed account....none of us can I guess except Frieda...
It's a pleasure to have you write upon the matter of her absence here...May she becomes active here again, soon!
Many thanks for sharing this one....Be blessed :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago

Bless You my friend for taking the time and trouble to comment here.. it is much appreciated.. mysel.. read more
Tahsin.Z🍁

1 Year Ago

Ameen.... :)
Neville

1 Year Ago

Yes indeed.... Amen.... :)
Neville, from title to parting thoughts this is worth discovering, and maybe a lesson of kindness for those who will see.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago

yes.. to quote that famous song.. I got you and you got me babe x
Cherrie Palmer

1 Year Ago

Lol now there's a couple I don't hear quoted every day. :)
Neville

1 Year Ago

............ :) N
What I enjoyed most about Freida was her endless array of poetical brilliance, her originality in literally everything she wrote, whether it was a poem, a comment, or a review, how her vibrant personality, and quick wit always shined through.
Among her works my favorites were the surprisingly impacting Haiku and Senryu like no one else's … for instance:

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Quickie Coffee Kisses Senryu
A Poem by Frieda P


Coffee & Kisses

hit & run, morning delight

caffeinated sex


© 2014 Frieda P

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

LOLOL … simply fantastic!
She could have stayed; we'd have crushed the troll for her, but her soft heart didn't know, I guess. :,(

Good write, Neville … miss her so! ⁓ Richard

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago

I think you just hit the nail on its proverbial head sir.. many thank you's for visiting and gracing.. read more
:(((((((((((((((((((((((((((((( a dear, spirited, Italian firecracker ... i sure do miss her Neville!! thank you for this tribute to her ...
E.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago

Bless ya bruvva .. I just knew it wouldn't take ya long to get here... Cheers Gene, take care and st.. read more
I am quite new and so don't know who Frieda is but your poem is lovely and indicates that she must have been a really wonderful writer and a sweet friend. I really liked the lines- I suspect because you frightened her away .Just like you have so many others. It's so true that the troller's do both discourage and frighten a writer and need to learn to appreciate others. I really wish I could have read some of her works.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago

what an unexpected but very sweet comment you have left here my friend.. yes, she was kinda special... read more
Anjeline

1 Year Ago

You're welcome:) and I hope we all find her profile and tell her how badly she is missed
Neville

1 Year Ago

Frieda's profile remains closed.. I mean the troll is still here..
I remember Frieda. Always kind to me. A kind and wonderful friend. Thank you Neville for the reminder of a friend.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago

I knew you would John & thank you my brother.. Neville
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

You are welcome Neville.
Neville

1 Year Ago

........ cheers John :)
Yes I do indeed remember her and sadly so many leave, often because of trolls.
Maybe she will return. Maybe she already has. :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago

thank you Ana.... I often wonder that myself :)
Yes, I remember Frieda... always read my humble poems like a 🐝 Bee to
Nectar she did please. Perhaps she will return with Spring blossoms of a new beginning with votes of love and devotion. truly, Pat

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago

wouldn't that be lovely.. thank you Pat x
I’m regretful that I did not know her Neville, as I have read many positive comments about her. It blows me away to read your tribute to her and realize that a troll on-site hurt her so much. The form and flow of your words are lovely, and the ending of the poem with that question mark is truly touching. I hope she knows that you and many others here remember her and that she has healed and is still writing. It is abhorent that such a thing happens here. Thank you for so eloquently reminding us of that, and of Freida.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago

thank you Annette for helping with your comment to keep her memory alive...and many thanks indeed fo.. read more
Annette Pisano-Higley

1 Year Ago

Always a pleasure my friend!
Neville

1 Year Ago

bless you Annette.. thank you & true

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