blur

surreal escapades when reality becomes hazy

Disappearing lakes engulfing disenchanted thoughts
The lack of coherence embedded in sand
Windshield moist with raindrops on forgotten mornings
I have not come to accept it, not yet.

A town full of blind people,
Colors taking a walk into dark alleys
Undeveloped photos fading in silver
The road in front is not visible, at all.


© Nothing Personal. March 03, 2011.

Author's Note

It's circumstantial

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like these words. Each line could take you to a different place. This is my favorite kind of poetry. Allow the reader to think and try to see what the writer is saying in their words. Many vision of people and life are hidden in the word. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[P.S I Love You]

Short and Spicy...

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

can't see a thing............excellent!

[Julie Beth]

i liked this alot you did an outstanding job :D

[The Analog Kid]

The brevity of this poem lets the mind wander in many directions.

[Loner]

Beautifully expressed ..... it seemed i was on a journey while reading every line of your chapter....

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loved the second stanza..made me sit up and think...

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Great poem! The words in this poem are strong and can cause your readers to use there brain and think! Awesome Job!

The flow was fantastic!

[KAREN]

Beautiful write! love the flow and how the words felt as I read!

[MandaBear]

it was wonderful

[Forgotten]

What can i say, it was wonderful, so deep and true. The imagery was spectacular and well i cannot say a word afray from this, it was truly a professional and expert write, i congratulate you well done