Light from a Distant Star

I see the Sunrise in your Eyes 

where Blue Morning Glories sigh 

The Light is from a Distant Star 

that fell where Passions subside... 

Eurasian Collared Doves Coo 

in the Morning Sun... 

Reviews

[Fran Marie]

A beautifully crafted piece of
brevity ..your chosen words.
are so lovely and vividly
expressed in poetic verse

Nice Work...

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Fran… your review is lovely.. a distant star May shine in lovers eyes if only we feel the warmth of a lover’s kiss. Gently, Pat

[Writergurl]

Ah, This is such a lovely write, my writes somehow always come out different.
This is so beautiful

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest writer gurl… there is so much depth in a lover’s eyes… we could send our Sighs to the Moon and be blessed . tenderly, Pat

[Neville]

you can beat an egg & a carpet, but ya just can't beat an Eurasian Collared Dove coo ........ what a delight you have penned & posted here Pat ......... lovely as a little linnets laugh in a laurel tree :) x

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Neville… you have inspired me to be more care-free.. “lovely as a little linnets laugh in a laurel tree” is so lilting and has captured the song 🎶 of a million Stars ⭐️ . May the years be kind to a Kindred Soul. 🙏 Pat

[Patricia]

This is beautiful and the Doves cooing just melted me, I love their cooing and I can’t wait for spring to hear ours. Wonderful writing Pat!

[Patricia Wedel]

Awesome… Patricia.. that you love Mourning Doves.. We always have a few on our Deck out the large Kitchen Window, along with Cardinals and now .. Blue Jays. My favorite are the Chickadees. Thanks for reading and I hope you will stay Safe and Warm. gently, Pat

[Patricia]

You're welcome Pat and you too :)

[Anuja Sharma]

The words are like some nature elements and here you portrayed the beautiful canvas with those words.
Loved and enjoyed this read Patricia.
Much Love,
Anu

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Abuja… Nature gives us shelter and meditation 🧘‍♂️ to survive… we are beholding to the beauty and romance of the Sky. Be blessed 😇 and Well. tenderly, Pat

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Romantic and picturesque, this is lovely. I enjoyed the read.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Fabian… to see the shades of amber reflected in a lovers eyes is why we venture out with hope and faith for a better World. Thank you for reading and believing. gently, Pat

[Laz K.]

Just gentle, lovely images here...this poem soothes my soul.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Laz…. Lovely to know this poem soothed your Soul… it is amazing that we can see the Beauty in our World … the Sunrise that begins a new Adventure. Wishing you a blessed and happy New Year. truly, Pat

[DIVYA]

The beautiful eyes of a lover...immortalized by your breathtaking words... To be able to gaze into that sunshine is life's greatest joy....
Thanks for sharing such beauty ❤

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest DIVYA… a lovers Eyes have a soft glow of the Sea where storms stir emotions. Your poetic Review is like a Calm before the Storm where Lovers kiss 💋 in the ebb of earthly Bliss. Thanks for your touch of beauty. gently, Pat

[DIVYA]

You're so welcome, dear Pat......⚘❤

[Chris Shaw]

Ah, the twinkle in a lover's eye. How glorious that can be. Dear Pat, you do romance so well. I love your poetic expression here and how you draw close to the natural environment. Your work is truly beautiful. Sending love across the waves.

Chris

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Chris… I love ❤️ how you compliment my poetry… the Soft brushes of Romance and the dance of Nature. We are expecting another Snow this Sunday and Monday to nourish the Earth. Be blessed with a warm hearth and dreams of Spring with blossoms. Love 💕 across the Waves. gently, Pat

[Chris Shaw]

Do you still have snow Pat? I came looking for a new poem, thinking I may have missed one. Alas no, but I'm sure your muse will visit soon. It has been sooo cold here, but no snow. Plenty of frost clinging in the garden though. Take care. Sending waves of love.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Chris... you are a Sweetheart... No, we had no more snow... after the Billows of Snowflakes of ten inches the first snow... then five days or so later another snow that was lighter and not deep at all. The third snow predicted did not show, except "a prayer of pretty snowflakes" for an hour at most.
Now at five am Saturday morning it is eighteen degrees outside according to my "smart phone". I bought cut tulips for our family room during the first Snow. Now I have cut Hydrangeas... (both from Wegmans Grocery... they always have cut flowers all year long... to make your own Bouquets... a bit pricey but worth the therapy emotionally. It is amazing how Flowers can heal a troubled Soul... especially through this Pandemic... and now Omigron... even mandating that five year old children be vaccinated in many States and Cities. Our World is topsy Turvey and I worry for the Children and young people; however, they are resilient. You have inspired me to pen a Poem.. and I thank you for that. Love across the Waves. Be Brave... Pat

[Chris Shaw]

Dear Pat, snowflakes, tulips and hydrangeas, a touch of beauty in a frightening world. I have fresh flowers too, to lift spirits. I have them in my hallway, to welcome me home when I venture out. We are being braver. We are eating out again, but with care. We are tired with the restrictions and long for normality. You take care dear Pat.

[Betty Hermelee]

The light from a distant star shines on a duo of love and passion where twilight eyes gaze at each other in the dawn of purple light.
Lovely Brevity Pat.
Best
B.

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Betty… a beautiful poetic Review…
Sweet as the morning dew … always a treasure to read your words. tenderly, Pat