Husband and Wife

Husband and Wife

A Poem by Perdition
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Just a little diddy

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Don't look at me like that, I told you we should have taken a right.

“WHAT? WHAT?!!”

“No you didn’t…You, You know what, I'm not arguing with you.”

You know we're going to die out here tonight, right?

“FINE!! Getting lost with you is the most wonderful thing I've ever known"

So, you’re happy right now?

“Let me out!”

© 2020 Perdition


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This made me laugh at the end. Nice write! Short but entertaining. Keep writing.

Posted 4 Days Ago


Perdition

4 Days Ago

hahaha...yeah, Seen and lived it. thank God for the advent of the GPS...glad you enjoyed it and than.. read more
How lucky I'm now for not having a husband nor knowing how to drive! but if You ask me they should turn it into a romantic event, IF they could lol. Hi there dear Joe, been such a long time, hope You are doing all well positively and peacefully. and thank You for putting a big smile on my face this morning LOL I really laughed

Posted 1 Week Ago


Perdition

1 Week Ago

Aww....Thank you Lightsong. "Been doing time in the Universal mind" and such but soon to return,...I.. read more
lightsong

1 Week Ago

Ha! somehow it seems we have been in the same place. Keep driving masterfully there and here of cour.. read more
I dislike driving with my wife. She scare the hell out of me. I liked and I understood the poem my friend. Thank you for sharing your amazing words and your thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 1 Month Ago


Perdition

1 Month Ago

Hahaha..think we've all been there, spouse-wise. Could it be the entangled destination or perhaps so.. read more
Coyote Poetry

1 Month Ago

Merry Christmas my friend and you are welcome.
Thank you for illustrating with utmost precision, exactly why I've never been married in my 64 years. I've had more fruitful conversations with my dogs. Yet the people my age (old) who b***h about their longterm relationships (like this) are the very ones who would die of loneliness without their partner to kick around (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Month Ago


Perdition

1 Month Ago

Hahaha...well never say never. Sorry for the delay but after 16 years I thought I would take a break.. read more
barleygirl

1 Month Ago

No worries. I get sketchier & sketchier as winter rolls on . . .
A psychological thriller awaiting. good work.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Perdition

2 Months Ago

Now I wonder if you were to take the period out from this review if that was the actual intended int.. read more
So you are alive! .........I was beginning to wonder ( snicker)

Posted 2 Months Ago


Perdition

2 Months Ago

Well more life-like...snicker back
at ya
Getting lost with the one you love.
Getting lost near a fast flowing river, or maybe in the middle of a Forrest.
She'll be missed.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Perdition

2 Months Ago

Soon all of America will know it...lol. Unless of course, it was a left .lol.
Paul Bell

2 Months Ago

Just America, I want the world to know it was, right.
Perdition

2 Months Ago

Seriously, Do you think she's NOT going to tell everyone in America? We need to start worrying about.. read more
The smallest yet the the most interesting of things often lead to such as this lol This made me smile because if with the right soul any situation can be liberation...

Posted 2 Months Ago


Perdition

2 Months Ago

Aww..so wonderful! Love that it made you smile as I normally write from a darker realm...well not so.. read more
dying happy or just dying to get away...
those damn directions don't make any sense.
you transcribe this short conversation in the vein of Robert Creeley...one of my favorite
beat poets...
so cool, and it sure feels like a self-conversation...we do get so lost sometimes---there is no way in or out of love.
j.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Perdition

2 Months Ago

Ole Mr. Creely and The Rain...one of my favorites as well. Obviously pre-smartphone..truly the bette.. read more

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