Husband and Wife

Just a little diddy

Don't look at me like that, I told you we should have taken a right.

“WHAT? WHAT?!!”

“No you didn’t…You, You know what, I'm not arguing with you.”

You know we're going to die out here tonight, right?

“FINE!! Getting lost with you is the most wonderful thing I've ever known"

So, you’re happy right now?

“Let me out!”

Reviews

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

This made me laugh at the end. Nice write! Short but entertaining. Keep writing.

[Perdition]

hahaha...yeah, Seen and lived it. thank God for the advent of the GPS...glad you enjoyed it and thank you for the kind words~

[lightsong]

How lucky I'm now for not having a husband nor knowing how to drive! but if You ask me they should turn it into a romantic event, IF they could lol. Hi there dear Joe, been such a long time, hope You are doing all well positively and peacefully. and thank You for putting a big smile on my face this morning LOL I really laughed

[Perdition]

Aww....Thank you Lightsong. "Been doing time in the Universal mind" and such but soon to return,...I hopes~

[lightsong]

Ha! somehow it seems we have been in the same place. Keep driving masterfully there and here of course 💞

[Coyote Poetry]

I dislike driving with my wife. She scare the hell out of me. I liked and I understood the poem my friend. Thank you for sharing your amazing words and your thoughts.
Coyote

[Perdition]

Hahaha..think we've all been there, spouse-wise. Could it be the entangled destination or perhaps something more in the way of Aquinas' five arguments for the existence of God inside a moving vehicle..lol.Happy Holidays my friend and thank the gods of Marconi for that radio!!

[Coyote Poetry]

Merry Christmas my friend and you are welcome.

[barleygirl]

Thank you for illustrating with utmost precision, exactly why I've never been married in my 64 years. I've had more fruitful conversations with my dogs. Yet the people my age (old) who b***h about their longterm relationships (like this) are the very ones who would die of loneliness without their partner to kick around (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Perdition]

Hahaha...well never say never. Sorry for the delay but after 16 years I thought I would take a break or two. Happy Holidays Margie and hugs back at you..Hope my home state starts seeing better days soon ;)

[barleygirl]

No worries. I get sketchier & sketchier as winter rolls on . . .

[ArundassTP]

A psychological thriller awaiting. good work.

[Perdition]

Now I wonder if you were to take the period out from this review if that was the actual intended intention? Either way, this review way, "vein, vidi, vici"...and very much appreciated.

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

So you are alive! .........I was beginning to wonder ( snicker)

[Perdition]

Well more life-like...snicker back
at ya

[Paul Bell]

Getting lost with the one you love.
Getting lost near a fast flowing river, or maybe in the middle of a Forrest.
She'll be missed.

[Perdition]

Maybe it was a left?

[Paul Bell]

It was a right, you know it, I know it.

[Perdition]

Soon all of America will know it...lol. Unless of course, it was a left .lol.

[Paul Bell]

Just America, I want the world to know it was, right.

[Perdition]

Seriously, Do you think she's NOT going to tell everyone in America? We need to start worrying about the universe...you head for Orion I'll go to Cassiopeia..lol. Maybe get Elon Musk on Board..Okay..Think we may have just hit "too far ? "..lol.

[Ruth]

The smallest yet the the most interesting of things often lead to such as this lol This made me smile because if with the right soul any situation can be liberation...

[Perdition]

Aww..so wonderful! Love that it made you smile as I normally write from a darker realm...well not so much "dark" as introspective. Thank you for stopping in to read and comment Ruth!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

dying happy or just dying to get away...
those damn directions don't make any sense.
you transcribe this short conversation in the vein of Robert Creeley...one of my favorite
beat poets...
so cool, and it sure feels like a self-conversation...we do get so lost sometimes---there is no way in or out of love.
j.

[Perdition]

Ole Mr. Creely and The Rain...one of my favorites as well. Obviously pre-smartphone..truly the better days ..lol. Thank you, kind Sir, as always a pleasure.