Ahem

 

I offer up

Four-lettered words

[Technically

Rendered meaningless]

And wonder which

Can inflict more hurt:

You C- - -

Or

You see,

I L- - - you.

 

Either way,

Eventually,

It ends in tears.

Reviews

[F. Nazarov]

Oh that's horrible, but true. It's a shame, as expressed in this piece, how even the good
avenues lead to the same horrible dead end, where you get flippin jumped.
I hate crying,
because when that happens you're probably alone at the dead end,
and that makes it worse.

[Anthony Morningstar]

So much pain. Something that can only be described by few. Because those that express and get things like this are alive morever then just getting older with just a few more lines to the face. But actually living with the pain and joy of life and then again the pain again.

So great.

[Emily B]

It is such a big, emotional pondering. It works perfectly. Every word, every line, every punctuation mark. Technical skill meets heartbreak in one fell swoop.