To my Thirteen year old self

To my Thirteen year old self

A Story by Rhianne Ney
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future to past self

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Hi, Rhianne,  I am you in the future but I want to remind you that you can always change your future. Please forget the past that is blinding you from your dreams. Live for the present so you can face the future with a head held up high.

      You’re a paranoid person in the future, you don’t trust anyone and you’re always left alone, I don’t want that to happen so please try your hardest to change and do your best. Open up from your shell and ran outside, mark your footprints in the ground, feel the breeze greeting you as you go; so with the touch of sunlight on your skin, run as far as you can and be free. You’re unique and you’ll never be anyone else, Love yourself and be happy. Good luck, I know you can do it.

© 2012 Rhianne Ney


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Rhianne Ney
thanks for the kind reviews(:

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I wish I could've given my thirteen year old self as good advice as you did. But then I realize that my troubles that I faced made me who I am today. I might find myself in a bit of a rut sometimes, but I always step forward. I loved the encouragement in your story. Never give up on your dreams! And know you're not alone. We're all here for you whenever you need us. We might not be able to see you in perrson, but sometimes receiving encouragement if only through writing helps with healing a hurt heart.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhianne Ney

9 Years Ago

Thanks a lot for a good message, I appreciate it ;D



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Nice message.wish i can give one to myself right now.
Open up from your shell and ran outside.Ran=*run*?

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhianne Ney

9 Years Ago

The others asked me to change it to ran... so I don't know..
thanks for reading anyway ;D
I think its cool to write a message to your future self. Unique idea

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhianne Ney

9 Years Ago

thanks for the kind reviews! :)
Words of wisdom. If only we would all take our own advice from our more mature, experienced selves. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhianne Ney

9 Years Ago

thanks for the review (:
I wish I could've given my thirteen year old self as good advice as you did. But then I realize that my troubles that I faced made me who I am today. I might find myself in a bit of a rut sometimes, but I always step forward. I loved the encouragement in your story. Never give up on your dreams! And know you're not alone. We're all here for you whenever you need us. We might not be able to see you in perrson, but sometimes receiving encouragement if only through writing helps with healing a hurt heart.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhianne Ney

9 Years Ago

Thanks a lot for a good message, I appreciate it ;D
Good wisdom in the poem. You are smart young lady. Good to learn from the past. Best to live for today and dreams. Thank you for the positive poem.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhianne Ney

9 Years Ago

thanks for the review :D
This is good very introspective i like the idea for going back and giving yourself advice


Posted 9 Years Ago


Rhianne Ney

9 Years Ago

thanks for the review! ;D
Really cute, simple, short and too sweet.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhianne Ney

9 Years Ago

thanks for the review! ;D
"I want to remind you that you can always change your future" Excellent advice to give yourself..the future is never set in stone, and it can be changed. great job! :D

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhianne Ney

9 Years Ago

thanks for the review! ;D
*claps* You can! I wish you luck in everything you do.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhianne Ney

9 Years Ago

Nope
Emma Lee-Riviera

9 Years Ago

Darn. Oh well, cute none-the-less. ^-^
Rhianne Ney

9 Years Ago

Thanks ;D

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