Whisper my name.

Whisper my name.

A Poem by Rhine Wolf
"

We have all at one time or anther felt something when no one was there.

"

 

When you are all alone and scared

And you feel a warm breeze swirl about you

That was me covering you with my love

 

When you crossing a road deep in thought

And you hear your name called, stopping you

That was me calling you back, so the car would miss

 

When you are lost and need to get home

And you see a familiar lane where you have never been

That was me showing you the way, guiding you

 

When you pick up my photo frame, letting out a tear

And you smell my fragrance and feel a tender touch

That was me, reminding you, I will always be there.

 

When you are in need of me

And feel no one is there

Whisper my name, listen and believe!


© 2011 Rhine Wolf


Author's Note

Rhine Wolf
this was meant as a part two to My Beautiful guiding light

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Touching write! I have experieced happenings similar to what you describe within your poem... the sense of a friend in need so I call and sure enough my voice was what they needed to hear. A few times in the past I've had the feeling that someone was grasping my hand; though that someone was hours away in another place. Don't know what it is the connections we share with some but, strong the connections be; and keeping them strong is very important!! Fine write!! Thanks for sharing!! Sallie Bear

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.



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Touching write! I have experieced happenings similar to what you describe within your poem... the sense of a friend in need so I call and sure enough my voice was what they needed to hear. A few times in the past I've had the feeling that someone was grasping my hand; though that someone was hours away in another place. Don't know what it is the connections we share with some but, strong the connections be; and keeping them strong is very important!! Fine write!! Thanks for sharing!! Sallie Bear

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so touching! beautifully written...I loved it....God Bless...DIANA

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is really beautifull and amoung my favourites. Well suprise suprise, this is me we are talking about after all. This is the really endearing side of you. Kudous

Posted 14 Years Ago


Aww this is a lovely poem hun, flows beautifully. I do believe we all have felt like that...
Keep writing.
Dawn

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this one is really good i love how deep it is all the way thru the poem

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What a beautiful write. I'll have to go and read part one now...

Nicely penned...

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Rhine Wolf
Rhine Wolf

Johannesburg, Heathen, South Africa



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