Unchain My Wings⁓* (soar)

Spencerian Sonnet

   

     

Reviews

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Richard... freedom is a right to embrace... but virtues are tough to
combine with flowers in their Prime. A garden of flowers can sing in
movements that inspire and provide a variety of smiles when aging arrives
and dancing is easier when the Tango is mastered and memory is gone.
gently, Pat

[Richard🖌]

Thank you, Dear Lady Pat, ever so wanly and gratefully.🔆

You're so very much like a fresh breath of Spring air, you make everything feel right.

I love your beautiful aphorism and praise, too.
Happy hugs 'n blessings! ⁓ Richard 🍃

[Azifwecare]

first let me compliment you on your poem cover. You always seem to find the perfect fitting picture. As for your words. They give me this dreamy state of being, wishing I too could fly.

[Richard🖌]

So might it be, Lady S-1 🕊️

That You may.
How wonderful it truly is to know we share a fantastical dream of soaring free, like the bountifully blessed, rainbow glistering dragonfly.

Thank you for your praise and for relating so truly to the words of this quaint little Sonnet, Dear Poetess.
With my warmest smile 'n hug! ⁓ Richard 🍃

[poetgurl]

Pon wings of fevered passion, let me try
to sample and breathe all fate can bestow,
to vibrate like the humble dragonfly;
within this stifled frame I cannot grow.

To Vibrate like a dragon fly,... I can feel this as a sputtering flight trying to find a place to land, but unsatisfied maybe with surroundings, or maybe just comfortable with the fluttering vibrations.
Dragonfly's can be used as a metaphor for lots of different reasons. I like the colorful imagery I took in with this.

within this stifled frame I cannot grow - Wow, do you wings ponder what to do, do you fly? do you grow? do you roam? the decision is yours. awesome write Richard

[Richard🖌]

Ahhh, Lady Kimmie 🥂

Once again, your charming touches dance across the page, filling a bard's hopes of pleasing and relating to the brim.
The stanza you've singled-out, and your comments on it, say so much of your depths in grasping the very essence of its true intent.

The spirit in your reactions are what make writing and sharing to me feel so very worthwhile.
Thank you most warmly, Dear Poetess! ⁓ Richard 🍃

[Cherrie Palmer]

Your work, is always a delight a reflection of your soul a true poet.

[Richard🖌]

Such lovely sentiments from a lovely lady go a long way in gratifying my hopeful poetic efforts. I'm not sure if a man is supposed to blush, but.....😊

Thank you, Cherrie Dear, with miles of smiles! ⁓ Richard 🍃

[Cherrie Palmer]

:) I hope you are having a wonderful Monday and you are busy penning another masterpiece.

[Richard🖌]

Wish your wish, Dear Lady Cherrie the day is most wonderful, my old is pen shined and filled, at the ready ✍

[Betty Hermelee]

A beautiful sonnet indeed. Whatever the cause, it's agony to feel like you are in chains; unable to find, discover new ground. It is worth taking a chance, than being bound to something unbearable, even if it's just a chance. And who knows where that chance may bring you. So great!!! Fondly Betty

[Richard🖌]

Hi, Dear Betty 🌼

Such a lovely pleasure it is to receive your excellently laid words of understanding, insight, and praise.

Thank you ever-so warmly for sharing this rather inspiring little piece with me … with happiest hugs! ⁓ Richard 🍃

[Unspoken poet]

This is one amazing and awesome write, much enjoyed this

[Richard🖌]

And, Kay-T,

I'm enjoying your amazing and awesome review . : )

Thank you ever-so sincerely, Dear Lady-Poet! ⁓ Richard 🍃

[heavenscentgirl1]

This is a most beautiful Sonnet Richard and you know there is nothing that I could suggest to make it any better ~ it’s Absolutely Perfect as Is. Keep sharing your words with us our Dear Master of Poetry. Hugs & Blessings 🤗🙏, MJ😇
Stay Safe & Well Richard 🙏

[Richard🖌]

Ahhh, Sweet Mary Jo 🥀

Your warmth, lovely heart, and praise are always as a balm to my humbled, happy being.
I am so very pleased and encouraged you've enjoyed this heartfelt little piece.

Thank you ever-so warmly for your "Hugs & Blessings," they mean so much to me.
With much love, my dear and longest friend! ⁓ Richard 🍃

[heavenscentgirl1]

Always my pleasure Richard. 😇🤗🙏

[Renée]

Me critique? It is not possible, but I did read your Spenserian Sonnet twice, aloud. Feeling the rhythm, and flow of thoughts. Your piece for me speaks strength, and overcoming limitations. Thoughts of my sister come to mind as I read, she lives with MS.
Beautiful as always Sir Richard.

[Richard🖌]

Dear Renée

Your voice is sweet as than any sugar plum grown, and as musical and Nature's wondrously lush symphony.
That you took time to read my little poem aloud twice, and because you're reminded of your darling sister by its words, are high, humbling praise I'd never expect to receive.

"Beautiful as always," is as beautiful as You.
My warmest, most grateful hugs to Thee! ⁓ Richard 🍃