Hungry

Hungry

A Poem by Rita L. Sev
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Immortal morsels

          sticking to the pot

 

                    well-stirred bits

                    of sweet,

                    sour,

                    bitter -

but never hold the salt

 

-        though better for the heart,

bland is poison

to the soul.

 

Shameful,

          the proud chef

          of an insipid brew

© 2015 Rita L. Sev


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Rita, This the first time I have read your writing and I enjoyed it. Clever way op putting your message out there. Variety always rules.
Richie B.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

7 Years Ago

Thank you, Richieb!
Variety is the spice of life... that goes for anything in life... that is why fining someone with many levels helps keep the fires of love burning bright for eternity.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

8 Years Ago

True - tasteless just won't do!
I only use seasoned salt in some of my recipes...whatever tastes good...nicely done Rita...Rose:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

8 Years Ago

:) Thanks, Rose!
living and playing it safe isnt living at all - if we gorge on bland we'll still get heartburn but without the offset of experiencing the spices life has to offer.
Superb writing Rita.
:)


Posted 8 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

8 Years Ago

Thank you, Anto - yes, heartburn, but no joy in the tasting. :)
I like to cook, and this made me smile. Bold flavors are my preference, so yes, bland is mighty poison. (Bring on the garlic, onions and peppers!)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

8 Years Ago

Bland ANYTHING - food, words, life - blech! :) So happy to give a smile! Thank you, Sam!

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