Poets Embrace

Poets Embrace

A Poem by Rossen
"

She writes her loss in her past, he writes his hope for the future

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She mourns lost love, hands to her face
sees fragile ones, her heart slips pace

I fall through spaces, cracks in this world
throwing romeo, to this heart unfurled

Forever lost on the path of never again
she bleeds black tears out of her pen

Through this atmosphere a torch I become
drawn to her gravity I glow like  the sun

My impossible dreamer writing this way
reliving dark tragedy at the end of her day

So close now I can feel her soft empathy
kindred and soothing, naked in front of me

Giving herself with such passionate heat
deep inside her warmth, I feel so complete

Holding my head to her compassionate breast
listening to loves echos, alive in her chest



© 2013 Rossen


Author's Note

  Rossen
the poets never meet in person...

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once again..one in it's own right.."my impossible dreamer writing this way
reliving dark tragedy at the end of her day

so close now I can feel her soft empathy
kindred and soothing, naked in front of me"


Posted 13 Years Ago


This was divine. Just divine!

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Breathtaking. Perfect rhythmand rhyme - a love supreme.

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I loved this it was amazing and had really good imagery and flow



Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 4 people found this review constructive.

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Oh so tender and such passion. This was just simply wonderful

Posted 13 Years Ago


there is such an intricate latticework between poets paired in tears and smiles~ lovely presentation~ two line breaks work beautifully here in enriching the flowering of imagery throughout~

Posted 13 Years Ago


Tenderness that reaches the full distance between two poets! Full of wonderful, compassionate energy.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love the contrasting feel of the hopes and memories…Rossen to me this is one of your best! Great flow and pace! And the feel I think I relate to the most, a poet’s song for sure…

Great Write!
RLG,
Tommy


Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 2 people found this review constructive.

this is beautiful :). you're proving to be very agile at twisting words :).

Posted 13 Years Ago



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  Rossen
Rossen

Sebastopol, CA



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