THE SILENT STORM

The splashing of the oceans,

 Is very loud and clear.

The roaring of the thunder,

 Is deafening to the ear.

 

  But when the heart is broken,

 Though storms inside abound,

 In silence you will suffer,

No one can hear the sound.          

Author's Note

From my book: A VAGABOND HEART

Reviews

[Ruth]

Deeply emotive Shabeeh, no storm can cover the echoes of heartbreak, poignant :)

[Shabeeh Haider]

Poppy, thank you for your kind words

[Ruth]

My pleasure Shabeeh :)

[Anindita Janhabee]

Very good poem sir, especially the last two lines... as usual, it takes away my complete attention.... well done...
Anindita : )

[Shabeeh Haider]

You have always been very kind with your words. Thank you Anindita

[Anindita Janhabee]

most welcome...

[Akshita]

You write such fine poems! If I am not wrong, then it is about how a heartbroken person feels, right?

[Shabeeh Haider]

Yes, Akshita. It's about a heart break. It kills you from inside but the outside world in not aware

[Moonie]

There's a saying...he who is sad, doesn't speak.
You sum up the feeling of melancholy very well!

[Shabeeh Haider]

Thank you for your kind review

[jacob erin-cilberto]

no one can hear those tears inside...it is a silent storm...
you capture the feeling so well here.

terrific imagery.

j.

[Shabeeh Haider]

Thank you Jacob

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

True, poetic and amazingly said! Great poem! :) Sometimes it seems the fact that it's silent tears us apart.

[Shabeeh Haider]

Cyprian, thank you

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

You're most welcome!