Footsteps

People say that everything happens

for a reason.

Every action, every choice is the

prelude to something larger.

Something that you may or may not

be able to control.

I don't think there's a greater being

in this universe.

Though sometimes, I'll admit

it does feel like that.

Like my path had already

been trodden for me.

All that I'm left to do

Is follow in their

Footsteps

Reviews

[icerhex]

I love the way you changed up the format, kind of broke out of the norm. It reminds me of a poem. Also the message is very important and well portrayed. Just in the last paragraph, there are some unesecary capitalisations. Thats all :)

[SheActsLikeSummer]

Oh yeah, I missed that, thanks so much, I'll fix it soon!! :)

[MoriartyMesa]

Every action, every choice is the
prelude to something larger.


Love that.

[SheActsLikeSummer]

Thanks. :)

[Skye]

It is written different, but I think its also easier to read, not to mention prettier. I really can't wait for you to post more, i want to see what else there is to this. :)

[Lena Rossmore]

The structure of this and the indentations is probably what makes it most successful. I find it so delicately written and it's quite thought-provoking. Beautiful.

[SheActsLikeSummer]

Thanks so much, I really appreciate it. :)