Deserted on the Doorstep

Deserted on the Doorstep

A Chapter by SheActsLikeSummer

Thrown from
the  car and
to the sidewalks curb
So now I'm here,
on the doorstep
suitcase by my feet
Debating  with
myself on what
I should do to announce
my presence.


© 2012 SheActsLikeSummer


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Short and sweet :D Did you mean to leave out full stops?

Posted 12 Years Ago


SheActsLikeSummer

12 Years Ago

I did indeed. I thought it would add more of an abrupt-i-ness to it just having one at the very end... read more
I need to read more! This is so interesting. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


SheActsLikeSummer

12 Years Ago

Ha ha, thank you! :)

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SheActsLikeSummer
SheActsLikeSummer

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I wish there was a single moment in my life that summed up who I am. Just a short snippet of time that I could copy and paste here so I didn't have to rack my mind for something to say. But I kind of .. more..

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