Weeping Eyes

The vacant look in her ocean eyes

Gazing up at star-speckled skies…

She sings,

But will never weep.

She closes her eyes,

But never finds sleep.

 

The vacant look in her lover’s eyes,

Star-speckled night skies…

His eyes are open,

But he forever sleeps.

He never sings,

But never weeps.

Reviews

[Lawrence Parlier]

Nice. The vacant look in her ocean eyes-is a great opener and pulls you right in to the poem. Wonderful job!

[♋ Iris ♋]

This is awesome! I love it!

[quarintine_deathangel]

Incredible job on the irony, and the poem has wonderful flow, very nice ;)

[luna11]

This is such a beautiful poem!
It flows so nicely and it's written so well. XD
xx