Prologue

Prologue

We stood there without moving, but beads of sweat rolled down both our cheeks. The lava was stirring below us and in places it shot up and melted the rock that was surrounding it. I was completely terrified, not wanting to move an inch for fear that something life threatening would happen. I stood motionless and suddenly began to feel lightheaded, like someone was invading my head. I soon began to feel powerless, but oddly, it did not bother me. I let the strange  feeling take control of my head and soon began to have memories off earlier today thrown at me.

Author's Note

Just a rough draft

Reviews

[Forist.johnston]

You made a great mental picture for me, it almost felt like the room got hotter. Great writing. Off to Chapter 1!

[Jules]

I think it's really good so far!! I like how descriptive you made this, and when I was reading this, I got a perfect mental picture, and I could almost feel light headed and powerful. Your grammar and spelling is good too, I didn't see any changes that needed to be made on that level either.