Low tide

Low tide

A Poem by willweb

The tide slips out

and the sand becomes part of time

Sifting moments into memories

scattered along a shore

of neglected feelings,

disappearing on the dampened outline

of life

 

© 2014 willweb


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And then you walk your own shores, gathering driftwords worn by waves of emotion while the moon pulls you into the horizon forgetting to tell you what is necessary to dry your heart. Sucks when the high tide comes in and washes away your castle.

Posted 1 Year Ago


willweb

1 Year Ago

That damn high tide. : ) Thanks again my friend.
Great metaphor and imagery. Will. A powerful piece.

Posted 10 Years Ago


willweb

10 Years Ago

Thank you so very much Rita.
Ah Will this is truly fantastic, I loved the metaphors in this one. I just love reading you.

Posted 10 Years Ago


willweb

10 Years Ago

Thank you so very much Noodlehead for this nice review. I am happy you liked this.
Having grown up on a shoreline, this one definitely speaks to me...I relate to it and enjoyed it very much...well done willweb.

Posted 10 Years Ago


willweb

10 Years Ago

Thank you so very much Kublkhan27 for your nice comments today.
Perfection, a human being wrapped in timeless time, it becomes a hard fossil of loneliness when it takes so many years... or a pearl, that shines, when this is a choice... beautiful beautiful poetry.

- Elisa

Posted 10 Years Ago


willweb

10 Years Ago

Elisa, thank you so very much for reading and leaving such a beautiful review. I am excited you enjo.. read more

10 Years Ago

You are very welcome, anytime. :)
A wonderful metaphor, and beautiful imagery.

Posted 10 Years Ago


willweb

10 Years Ago

KLGoode, thank you so very much for all of your visits an your nice comments. I am happy you enjoyed.. read more
Awesome pen Will you have portrayed so much with your few words :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


willweb

10 Years Ago

Thank you so very much Vidya. Your comments are very special to me.
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

You are welcome Will :)
This is why I am such a fan if the short and sweet.
It's high impact. You pack a big punch with just a few words.
Great poem Will. Really love it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


willweb

10 Years Ago

Thank you so very much Ance for this wonderful review.

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Hi, I am willweb. Maybe you remember me and maybe you don't. I have been writing here on and off for years. I pop in and write and read and comment and make friends and learn new things. I enjoy maki.. more..

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