left overs

a nasty surprise.

An earwig surprise
in left over minute rice
made me think of you!

Reviews

[J. K. Beach]

OK... your getting close to the line :) Same as the skunky dude? Or another bum? This is really well written. I just flows really well. To bad the subject was creepy ;)

[Lyn Anderson]

Yeah, for a while it was all the same subject, this place helped me vent at the time.

[J. K. Beach]

I hear you sister! I'm still venting at times...

[Rita L. Sev]

Ugh! Staying away from minute rice from now on... and I'm glad not to be the "you" of this poem! You got your point across well in these few lines, KL!

[Lyn Anderson]

Ha thanks.:)

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Agree with Frieda I cant stomach that and rice I got to eat for next 2 weeks geezzzzz M ! Lol

[Lyn Anderson]

I would say sorry but that wouldn't be truthful.

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Smilesssssssssss your mean lol:)

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Last time I seen those nasty things was when they made Mr good bars wrapped in paper

[Lyn Anderson]

Cruel. And you like it that way:)

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Yeah I do lol:)

[Frieda P]

Ewww the imagery, I'm going to have a hard time eating rice after this one....thanks a lot!

[Lyn Anderson]

Earwigs are among the nastiest critters I have had the displeasure of meeting.:)

[Frieda P]

Ha aside from 'him' you mean haha ;-)

[Lyn Anderson]

Yes, well, that was implied in my answer, was it not?

[Frieda P]

I just wanted to reiterate it in my reply sista ;-P

[Caradoc]

This reminds me of "The Lost Boys", lol.

"You're eating maggots, Michael, how do they taste?"

*shudder*.

-Caradoc

[Lyn Anderson]

Ahhh this is awesome. I forgot about that.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i used to like rice (:....

[Lyn Anderson]

Well, then I guess I accomplished something ...:)

[Kai Rollins]

Haiku. Nasty surprise. Any more to say seems unnecessary

[Lyn Anderson]

Yes I guess it is kind of a hybrid piece, since an earwig is natural!

[David Scott]

Passive aggressive much? Ha.
Please don't think of me when you eat you infested rice! ;p
Funny.