translucent thought patterns

not sure where this one goes

my thoughts are translucent --
transcendent state
from the opacity of you.

trying to decipher
the messages
that are trapped
inside the new.

am I seeing something
that isn't there?
or supplanting today
with past mistakes?

maybe I need
those x ray glasses
from the back of a magazine.

Author's Note

Reviews

[therisa]

KL, if you find those glasses, can I borrow them? Have a few people, I would like to know, what their thought process is. Then, again, maybe not, a good idea.

[Lyn Anderson]

Yeah, kind of a double edged sword, huh? thanks

[therisa]

Yup. Your welcome, KL.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Another clever piece describing confusion over communication in flowing free verse.

[Lyn Anderson]

You are too kind, John. and I am behind in my reading.:)