Finding Naomi

Finding Naomi

A Poem by Naomi Roseღ

  I am chipping away
  my skin, and seeing
  the old me return.

  She has been gone
  for too long.

  I have felt her
  inside my stomach,
  pounding on my
  insides demanding
  for her release. 

  I have seen her floating
  in my pupils begging
  to be free again.

  Now she is she.

  The new Naomi is dead.

  The old Naomi has returned
  once again. 

© 2011 Naomi Roseღ


Author's Note

Naomi Roseღ
I know its not that good :/ Review anyways please

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I like it. I really enjoyed the ending.
♥ Ta'Shandra

Posted 8 Years Ago


Oh I really enjoyed this one,
Loved the ending
so nicely written.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I like it, You expressed how you became someone else, but finally found the Naomi that you loved most and brought her back!

Posted 8 Years Ago


i like it, i think its good to bring out ones old self, instead of the image we put on for others


Posted 8 Years Ago


I liked it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Not that good? I think it's superb! (I hope I spelled that right..) The word pictures are so different and intriguing. I really, really, think this is a very good poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago


it is good!

Posted 8 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well I thought it was good. It's about identity restoration. I hope you keep finding you!

Posted 8 Years Ago


The new Naomi is dead.

I love that, because like, most people write about old selves becoming new again. This is a completely different perspective on the whole "I'm gonna become a new person" kind of thing. I love it! This is SO much better than the last one I read, though I couldn't remember for the life of me what the title of that one was.
ANYWAY! My point is, this was amazing, and I'm putitng it in my library the first chance I get!

Posted 8 Years Ago


I love this (: it's really pretty. I have that feeling all the time..idk how to bring the old me back. I love this poem though, and I relate. Great job (:
100/100

Posted 8 Years Ago



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