The Last Song I'm Wasting On You...

Inspired by a song :)

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THE LAST SONG I’M WASTING ON YOU….

 

 

 

 

This is not the first song which I’m writing for you,

Heartless everyday yet I write something on you,

Endlessly I have realized that now I can’t forget you.

 

 Lexicon now can’t give enough words to me,

Any sunrise now can’t ignite that passion in me.

Sorrow surrounds me from every side,

This light now seems to turn into a dark night.

 

Stop coming into my thoughts,

Oh! I don’t need you anymore.

Now I have started to move on with life,

Go away, I don’t cry for you anymore.

 

 I’m watching the passage of your every memory,

Most of them now seem like some old sad story.

 

Writing was my passion, but you made it my life,

As about you I can write throughout my life.

Still I swear I’ll never write anything more on you,

This pain which you gave me is now counting on you.

 I will find something else to waste my words,

No more I will write just to feel good enough.

Gnarled I will feel to write again those words.

 

Oh! This is the last song I’m wasting on you,

No, now you can’t hide as this one is just for you.

 

Your presence no more surrounds me,

Only I feel myself and this world without you.

Unwillingly I promise I will never waste my words on you…

 

 

 

Author's Note

Just yesterday only I was practicing with my band and just for a break we started to sing the song "The Last Song I'm wasting On You" by Evanescence. Since we all are their huge fans and I was so much into that mood that this piece came into my mind.
It is entirely inspired by the song "The last song I'm wasting on you" by Evanescence :)

Reviews

[JENY]

Wow….
Fantastic….
A sincere translation…
Of a dilemma….into a poem…
Very perfect in that sense….
Very touching too…
You attempt to come to terms with simultaneous feelings of attraction and repulsion…towards your object of love…

[Karl]

Oh my god!
This is the first poem I'm reading here at this site. I'm new here and saw this poem as the featured poem of the day and now I know why it has been featured. It is wow!

[Innocent]

After about ages I'm reading such a beautiful and strong poem and I'm out of my words now.
This is fantastic, brilliant, awesome.

[Together]

I really liked this BHavya, Great work

[LlamaLord]

Another beauty my friend. Always enjoy reading your work. This one really speaks to me in a way that your other pieces dont. This seems to have more of a direct meaning, instead of more simplistic ideas. Thats just another thing a love about your work; you change it up. I always have a hard time trying to figure out how I am going to express love through words this time. You always find a better, or another angle. And one last thing... every time i read a single piece of yours, I find about 4 new words Ive never even heard of. I usually end up looking them up, and writing them down..haha. Anyway, great work as always!

-Austin

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I'm a GREAT fan of Evanescence and the title of your poem pushed me to read it
And i guess this line: "No more I will write just to feel good enough." was inspired by the song "Good Enough" by Evanescence .. i may be wrong ..

I loved these lines:

Sorrow surrounds me from every side,
This light now seems to turn into a dark night.

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Writing was my passion, but you made it my life,
As about you I can write throughout my life.
Still I swear I'll never write anything more on you,
This pain which you gave me is now counting on you.
I will find something else to waste my words,
No more I will write just to feel good enough.
Gnarled I will feel to write again those words.

It's a heart-rending, yet wonderful piece .. the love you have for that person, and the ignorance you want to gain from it ..

Love It

Ek dham khoob!!

[Amanda]

Oh! This is the last song I'm wasting on you,
No, now you can't hide as this one is just for you.

Your presence no more surrounds me,
Only I feel myself and this world without you.
Unwillingly I promise I will never waste my words on you�

this is sad and quite beautiful, Bhavya....you always seem to pour out the best of your heart in your writings...they keep getting better and better. well done dear :)

A xox

[Roxy]

This is really like....
I don't have words to explain what I felt after reading this poem.
This is out of this world man!
I'm constantly in love with your work.

[Blackbeats]

Dude, this is so sad and beautiful.
I love this way you write. Hope this won't be the last song.

[Kevin Andros]

Evanescnece is superb alright. Nice write.. Nice inspiration kiddo. ~KA~

[Blue Rose]

You know, I realized that it is actually an Acrostic after when I noticed that bold letters, since by its flow it is very hard for anyone to judge that.
Often a lot of Acrostics doesnt have the flow of a poetry but this one is a beautiful exception