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A Poem by frozensakura

I wish I wish with all my heart
just to see you once again
I miss you very much
it's just not the same with you gone

there's a hole in our heart
and silence in the air
to leave so sudden
hurt so bad

you were my aunty
and I will never forget
the fun we had and times we shared
for all these memories will be treasured
I love you so much
and know your okay, never in pain
and I will try to stay sane
but I still feel empty inside
without you here by my side

I look around and see you everywhere
everything makes me think of you
I look through old photographs
and see you there by my side, holding my hand
and I start to cry
the pain returns, and I wanna die
I know your with me
as I get stronger everyday

uncle misses you like crazy
and cries everyday
for he can't wait to see you again

you were his first and only love
your parents thought your love was rash
you vow your vows and said "I do"
and together till the end was held forever true


We love Aunty Tammy always and forever may you rest in peace, to never be forgotten
2.12.11

© 2013 frozensakura


Author's Note

frozensakura
I wrote this at 1am, cause i couldn't sleep... it fails...
~Nichole Marie Nehring<3

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I lost people who aren't close to me like my cousin but I know how hard it is to lose someone especially when they meant a lot to you... if I can go back in time I wish I will be able to spend time with my cousin so her death would really be a loss and not just something that happened one day.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

frozensakura

11 Years Ago

i know what you mean :(



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Thats reall good, actully almost made me cry reminded me of someone one of a kind......really good work.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

now you got me remembering my grabdpa and i was just starting to move on


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

a very beautiful tribute!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very sad poem but a great tribute for someone who has passed away. I'm so sorry to hear about your aunt. Losing someone that is dear to us can be such a heart-breaking experience. I know the pain well. I've lost one grandfather from my dad's side of the family last year. He was a sweet grandpa and it was so sad to hear of the news. Treasure those precious memories. It will keep her alive always and she will always be with you whenever you need her. I'm so sorry for your loss. It's okay to cry.. it's okay to grieve. This was such a touching poem. So heartfelt. These lines are probably the strongest in this poem:

"I look around and see you everywhere
everything makes me think of you
I look through old photographs
and see you there by my side, holding my hand
and I start to cry
the pain returns, and I wanna die
I know your with me
as I get stronger everyday"



Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a sad poem but a dedication for someone who has died in peace. When someone dies its the worst pain and I can't imagine the pain.

"I look around and see you everywhere
everything makes me think of you
I look through old photographs
and see you there by my side, holding my hand
and I start to cry
the pain returns, and I wanna die
I know your with me
as I get stronger everyday"

Memories are the enemy and it stings every time to think about it but this poem amuses me for how heartfelt it is, every word true to itself.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is beautiful and sad sis

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

aww so sweet good job keep up the good work.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very Nice read and heart felt.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this, It is soo pure and true, I believe this is very different and breath taking, I believe I can relate very much. Very great job.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aw, I can relate to your pain Chole, I saw my grandmother die. But you know what helps, to think about the fond memories of her, keep them close to your heart.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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