...

I wish I wish with all my heart
just to see you once again
I miss you very much
it's just not the same with you gone

there's a hole in our heart
and silence in the air
to leave so sudden
hurt so bad

you were my aunty
and I will never forget
the fun we had and times we shared
for all these memories will be treasured
I love you so much
and know your okay, never in pain
and I will try to stay sane
but I still feel empty inside
without you here by my side

I look around and see you everywhere
everything makes me think of you
I look through old photographs
and see you there by my side, holding my hand
and I start to cry
the pain returns, and I wanna die
I know your with me
as I get stronger everyday

uncle misses you like crazy
and cries everyday
for he can't wait to see you again

you were his first and only love
your parents thought your love was rash
you vow your vows and said "I do"
and together till the end was held forever true


We love Aunty Tammy always and forever may you rest in peace, to never be forgotten
2.12.11

Author's Note

I wrote this at 1am, cause i couldn't sleep... it fails...
~Nichole Marie Nehring<3

Reviews

[Rhianne Ney]

I lost people who aren't close to me like my cousin but I know how hard it is to lose someone especially when they meant a lot to you... if I can go back in time I wish I will be able to spend time with my cousin so her death would really be a loss and not just something that happened one day.

[frozensakura]

i know what you mean :(

[w2de35657u687y4324rf]

I can sympathize with late night writes. Depressing, but the end was uplifting. Nice.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

Sad, but still a wonderful, heartfelt read.

[hmarieee]

lol it does not fail (: its beautiful and so nice of you to write this in her memory. sorry for your loss.

[realmwriter]

It fails not to me it discribes what I went trough when my grampa died. I wrote after that as you wrote after this andit to me failed as this does to you. In time, In time!

[TheElfPrincess]

A lovely poem, with lots of emotions. It was sad and I'm sorry for your loss, but sometimes sadness can bring wonderful pieces of art. Well done.

It comes from the heart, so it shouldn't be seen as a failure if you were being true to yourself when writing it. Also, a tip: "you're" and capitalization. Some of the words were repetitive and could be more "colorful" so to speak. A thesaurus is a writer's best friend! Other than that, I think you had your mind and heart set in the right place to make this meaningful and it has become a beautiful, poem that tugs at my heart. You've done a nice job.

[Myrna H. Rickard]

Fill that gaping hole with beautiful memories. It helps. Nice write!

[Helpless]

great title and the poem was really interesting :) i like it

[alexlessah]

I am very sorry about your loss, a very nice poem though.

[FemmeSpookyCorpse]

This is a beautiful piece! The emotions and sadness you feel are strongly presented...and shared by all who read this piece. It helps to remember positive times and to celebrate them. I love this piece = ]

-Femme_Gothique (Brittany)