butterflies...

butterflies...

A Poem by frozensakura

Butterflies butterflies everywhere
close your eyes and turn three times
when you do you will see
all is there for you and me
time to play and time to dance
you just have to take a chance...

When time is done you will know
the chimes will ring and start to sing
just touch your toes and squeeze your nose
when your done repeat this verse
butterflies butterflies everywhere...

Be of haste
there's no time to waste
when you see a bell that starts to yell
this is how you know it is time to go and say goodbye
tomorrow is another day
there's time to play and time to dance
tomorrow you can take that chance
remember the chimes
remember the bell
for when you're there all is well

© 2013 frozensakura


Author's Note

frozensakura
haha don't ask... i get really bored at 3am...
~Nichole Marie Nehring<3

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This reminds me when I was in Elementary School. My 5th grade class raised butterflies (during that year they were my favorite animal because of this).
This reminds me of the lovely sense of innocence and freedom those butterflies gave me.
Thanks for writing this.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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this is awesome xD i love you imagine

Posted 12 Years Ago


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i dont know why...i could see butterflies actually! lol

a very very nice poem...had a kind of soothing effect!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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When I read this, I imagined myself in a fairy realm where magic happens and dreams come true. That's the imagery that I saw and I love how you added the butterflies as an addition to make it amusing.

"all is there for you and me
time to play and time to dance
you just have to take a chance..."

Taking the chance will make a change in your life for eternity. A magical world you have created and for that I salute you.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Reminds me a bit of "Ring around the rosey, pocket full of poseys...." It has the lyrical child's rhyme to it that one would chant in a sing-song voice. Sometimes the best musings come in the wee hours of the moon. A little eerie, but delightful....

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Very nice poem. I really liked it. I am not much into poetry I am rather in writing novels and stories. Lucie

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

oh i like this very much

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Its actually well done... a lively lil twist of whim and whimsy...

Chris

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aww Love it

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very magical x]

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So soft and whimsical to the senses. A lovely poem! I love butterflies - their so beautiful!
WindSong

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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