And So It Is

sun shines

regardless of 

grief

each one of us

a leaf waving

on a deciduous tree

not quite 

knowing when our

goodbye will arrive

fleeting

like a rain cloud

passing through

fragile

as a white winged

butterfly

though some

wield a sledge hammer

strike a mighty blow

can change

a river's flow

in waters of history

Reviews

[Neville]

maybe it's just as well we don't know when that moment will arrive .. at least most of us don't .. here though, you have not only reminded us of our own mortality, indeed of all things both animate and inanimate, but you have most importantly captured the very essence of life's fragility .. the fleeting and transitory nature of it ............ having got that off my chest, I must also say it's an honour to be #75 on your impressive list of reviewers .. an amazing achievement and most worthy .. Neville

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you for that lovely review Neville. Pleased you left your mark on this page. It means a lot.read moreThank you for that lovely review Neville. Pleased you left your mark on this page. It means a lot.

Chris

[GrayHalwk]

This strikes a mystery in my soul, as though you recently lost someone. Your a loving person your reviews of other authors are kind I sent a friend request but you don't have to read mine. But I wanted to get to know your wark. This was an inspiring peace thanks for sharing it.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you for your kind response. Pleased you enjoyed the read.

Chris

[J. B.]

simply worded with complex imagery. three lines per stanza is always a brave and bold choice, and you have done this piece quite nicely, as such.

-J-

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you for your response. Pleased you enjoyed the read.

Chris

[NotUsinganymore]

Very nice poem. It's funny how sometimes you can be grieving but the world moves on in a happy manner. We never know what people are thinking.

[Pete]

there is a season for everything, we are no exception. everything in history was once the present. change is inevitable and time marches on. is it quiet and peaceful or a whirlwind? wonderful imagery and smooth flow whilst driving home its point -

each one of us
a leaf waving
on a deciduous tree

the fight for survival -

though some
wield a sledge hammer
strike a mighty blow

all returns from whence it came to complete the cycle of life ... :)

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Pete for your response. All good wishes.

Chris

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Chris... your poetry describes the difficult
times of the CoronaVirus ... as we do not know when
we may pass into the great beyond much too soon,
especially for those who are compromised by respiratory or
life-threatening situations... even aging. We should be able to
take our last breath where flowers bloom and people gather
to sing our favorite tunes unencumbered by the darkest days of
an evil era of worry and wait. May we wait at Heaven Gate as long as
wishes are made when stars shine bright. truly, Pat

[Chris Shaw]

Dear Pat, many thanks for leaving your precious thoughts. Most appreciated.

Chris

[Patricia Wedel]

We are in shock this could happen in our world... trust you are well ...!thinking positive and following guidelines always helps. So far we are fine... gently, Pat

[Derekv]

Beautiful poem, Chris. The opening line is so powerful - "The sun shines regardless of grief". We might not want it to, but the world will always move on, even when it feels like time has stopped for us. Keep up the great work!

-Derekv

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Derek. I appreciate your thoughts. All good wishes.

Chris

[Rania M]

I found your reference to 'a leaf waving
on a deciduous tree' just perfect . It says everything as to how transient and delicate our lives really are. No match to the force of flow of the river that will eventually sweep everyone away.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you dear Rania for your thoughts. You are appreciated.

Chris

[Carola]

you have a wonderful descriptive way with words chris !! i love it!
my poetry is a bit more pedestrian.
cheerio carola

[Chris Shaw]

Dear Carola, thank you for your kind thoughts. You write wonderful poetry, my friend. All good wishes across the miles.

Chris

[JamesTleBourn]

Wow! Your metaphors *sure are* present! I envy your way with words. Good read.

James

[Chris Shaw]

James, I welcome your visit and appreciate your kind thoughts. All good wishes.

Chris

[light and ashes]

Brilliant words. Great work.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you so much. Your thoughts welcomed and appreciated. All good wishes.

Chris

[light and ashes]

You're welcome dear friend :)