Aspects Of Light

Spontaneous poetry

let there always
always be
this glare from sunlight
on the sea
that lifts all spirits
in distress
that calms and soothes
all restlessness
to sprinkle sparkle
where the mood
of brooding clouds
have done their best
to hamper thoughts
of happiness
to sink the soul
beneath the waves
into the ocean's
darkest caves

Reviews

[Robert Haigh]

We experience sunshine and showers in our lives, including a few storms - both literally and metaphorically! The sun usually shines after a storm, even if not straight away. Looking on the bright side can keep us going! The spontaneity is evident in this poem, I think, Chris. Strange how sometimes we can labour over a poem for days or even weeks (at least, that is often my experience), and yet some poems can be dashed off in 10 minutes or so, with little if any re-writing to be done! A fine write!

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Robert. So true about spontaneous writes. This one took less than ten minutes and yet usually I labour over my words. Strange how that can happen. Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts here. You are appreciated.

Chris

[Dylan Macadham]

Hi again Chris, I so often admire your way of blending your moods and the elements.
At first read, I "spontaneously' wondered if "blaze" works better than "glare,
but after my second, I think glare nails it :)

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Dylan. You know blaze did briefly come into my mind, but the sunlight was so strong, it was definitely a glare. So appreciate your reviews.

Chris

[Shelley Warner]

I also like the line "to sprinkle sparkle"

[Chris Shaw]

So did I Shelley. So did I :)) Thank you.

[Shelley Warner]

This is exquisite. I like the short lines. It's visually pleasing. And the thoughts are so soothing.

[Chris Shaw]

That's a very welcome review Shelley. Pleased you like this poem.

Chris

[Ruth]

The ocean. What a vastly inviting yet oppressive abode. As always dear Chris...your poetry strikes at the core. The sun is so needed for many - including myself - when those clouds brood and bruise thoughts. Wonderful poem!

[Chris Shaw]

Dear Ruth, the power of the sun never ceases to amaze me. It absorbs negativity. Thank you so much for your review. Sending love across the pond :)

Chris

[Chris Shaw]

Your new avatar is stroking. I love it dear friend. Monochrome is powerful.

[Ruth]

Thank you dear hearr and you look wonderful in your new avatar also :) Have a great day hon :)

[Chris Shaw]

Look at my typos. Striking, I meant. Here I am typing on a small screen in the dark :) Mistakes happen :) Have a great new day.

[Ruth]

I understans typos :) lol

[Ruth]

See...even typo day for me lol

[jacob erin-cilberto]

clouds cannot bring us down if we let that sun shine in our hearts...
the alliteration is so cool in this poem...
reading this is like taking a joyous tumble down a hill...

j.

[Chris Shaw]

Dear J, what fun to take a joyous tumble down a hill. Let the sun shine on us. Thank you my dear friend.

Chris

[barleygirl]

Your imagery is powerful & dramatic, just like looking upon a dramatic seascape! (((HUGS)))

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Margie. I love the moods of the ocean.

Chris

[Melinda McQueen]

Dearest Chris, this is such a lovely poem. I like the flow as well as the creativity in using light and darkness.

[Chris Shaw]

So pleased you enjoyed the read Melinda. Thank you.

Chris

[Melinda McQueen]

You're welcome!

[Vertigo Cat1111]

An uplifting piece to start the day out with some positivity and thankfulness! Poems like these often remind me to be grateful for our earth and all the colors and lights that it creates. I love the way you evoke emotions through different pieces of the planet. Caves, light, ocean, water. It's comforting to know, in some way, nature will always be around.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Colacat for your lovely review. Appreciate your visit.

Chris

[Ken Simm.]

This is one I simply had to comment on. I don't think I've seen a better description of my thoughts on light or a better use of words about light. The contact between light and emotion is clear and sparkling here.

[Chris Shaw]

This is a lovely review Ken and I thank you for it. All good wishes.

Chris

[Coyote Poetry]

I loved the poem. The running of words led to a proper ending. You took the reader with her to many places and thoughts. Thank you dear Chris for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Coyote for leaving such a thoughtful review. You are appreciated.

Chris

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome dear Chris.