Awaken Me
A Poem by
Marie Harrison
my love for ballet dancing and playing the cello
Awaken Me
Deep
chords
Of a
solemn cello
Chiseling
swiftly up
And
down the scales
Stir
raw emotions
Asleep
in me
Gliding
my feet
Back
and forth
Swiftly,
like a
Hummingbird
just
Learning
to fly
My
satin toes
Make
rhythmic
Thrusts
against
The
hardwoods,
As my
arms
Soar
through
The air
Strings
Of the
cello
Overtake
Me
They
cast
Their
spell on
My
spirit
Rich
tones
Stoke
the glowing
Embers
of my
Soul
© 2011 Marie Harrison
Reviews
Very beautiful. The love of dance is strong in this one.
Posted 12 Years Ago
I can hear the sweet music now.
Posted 12 Years Ago
I can hear the sweet music now.
"Rich tones
Stoke the glowing
Embers of my
Soul"
I simply ADORE the wording of those lines!
Posted 12 Years Ago
"Rich tones
Stoke the glowing
Embers of my
Soul"
I simply ADORE the wording of those lines!
i like it! its personal, very unique style of writing
Posted 12 Years Ago
i like it! its personal, very unique style of writing
This is very beautiful. I love it! The way you describe everything, I can imagine it clearly in my mind.
Posted 12 Years Ago
This is very beautiful. I love it! The way you describe everything, I can imagine it clearly in my mind.
Oh this is so lovely :) A combination that is so hard not to love...everything and I mean everything about this is divine hon!
xx
Posted 12 Years Ago
Oh this is so lovely :) A combination that is so hard not to love...everything and I mean everything about this is divine hon!
xx
The fierce element of noxious emotion pours from your pen, a great read, well done.
Posted 12 Years Ago
The fierce element of noxious emotion pours from your pen, a great read, well done.
Awwwww ! "Rich tones stoke the glowing
embers of my soul". How nice. Kind of
like the song of the hummngbird.
Lay it on us. Your readers can take all
of this you can dish out.
Great writing .
----- Eagle Cruagh
Posted 12 Years Ago
Awwwww ! "Rich tones stoke the glowing
embers of my soul". How nice. Kind of
like the song of the hummngbird.
Lay it on us. Your readers can take all
of this you can dish out.
Great writing .
----- Eagle Cruagh
I've always loved the deep rich sounds of the cello. Beautiful instrument. You portrayed it nicely
Posted 12 Years Ago
I've always loved the deep rich sounds of the cello. Beautiful instrument. You portrayed it nicely
Lovely and oh so musical. I adore the font you used :)
Posted 12 Years Ago
Lovely and oh so musical. I adore the font you used :)
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Added on August 31, 2011
Last Updated on August 31, 2011
Author
Marie Harrison Atlanta, GA
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Momma told me to get out and enjoy life, so now I'm going to dance.
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