Curiosity

Curiosity 

this got the young boy killed.

it got that unprotected man ill.

this had gotten you to reach your full potential 

it made you realize what are lifes essential 

this made you realize that world isn't there for you

it made you think that no matter how red or how healthy your heart is 

   there is always space for ... blue

this made you tattoo it in your brain to never do it again

it got you neglecting everything negative including friends 

this got me winning millions of dollars of the lottery 

it got my attention & it was from the honest me

this got me thinking and on idle 

it got my emotions dialogue on recital 

this got the person discovering a new other side 

it has you on the passenger side , while the car asks

   "Are you ready to drive?"

this got a girl with huge whole in her heart

it got this world ruined from the start

it got this world so easy on hiding the truth 

this happens because we refused . get amused

                    and get duped! 

Now you know

Reviews

[L.Edward]

Good bit of street-wise philosophy going on there. Thanx for sharing.

[Sue]

I keep imagining you reading this and I love the flow and rhythm, another good poem :)

[wordwarrior]

Excellent wording and message here. Thought provoking to say the least.
Clever writing!

[Lydia Shutter]

The emotions are intense in this one! One thing leads to another and the curious nature of the human being can be both bad and good. Makes a person think. I liked it. Lydi**

[Mike Emil]

HAI
so many good points in here
I get to feeling this way
then i crumble my papers up
and throw them across the room
time to start over
or commit sebuku

[Haley Harrigan]

That is seriously deep, sweetie. I love it.

[Sadie Maisonet]

The way you wrote this was really swell. It speaks more than truth, it speaks the mind. How we live every day. Swell, just swell. Pen on.

[ThoughtsofShyann]

I really like the emotion in this and I felt every world as if it was speaking to me directly.

[Calibaster]

I really like the end, I never quite thought of curiosity as bad, except for cats! :)

[Eddie Phillips]

Curiosity has taken out a lot of people! LOL I love how you constructed this poem. You kept it moving and had me intrigued through the whole poem. It was a great write!