Curiosity

Curiosity 

this got the young boy killed.

it got that unprotected man ill.

this had gotten you to reach your full potential 

it made you realize what are lifes essential 

this made you realize that world isn't there for you

it made you think that no matter how red or how healthy your heart is 

   there is always space for ... blue

this made you tattoo it in your brain to never do it again

it got you neglecting everything negative including friends 

this got me winning millions of dollars of the lottery 

it got my attention & it was from the honest me

this got me thinking and on idle 

it got my emotions dialogue on recital 

this got the person discovering a new other side 

it has you on the passenger side , while the car asks

   "Are you ready to drive?"

this got a girl with huge whole in her heart

it got this world ruined from the start

it got this world so easy on hiding the truth 

this happens because we refused . get amused

                    and get duped! 

Now you know

Reviews

[Prritiy]

it got that unprotected man ill.
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it made you think that no matter how red or how healthy your heart is
there is always space for ... blue

this made you tattoo it in your brain to never do it again

thoughtful and thought provoking write, some lines were very catchy. liked the composition.

best wishes

[Baban.A.A]

the poem is great, but why we should view life pessimsitically. I trust it depends on how you take life for granted, or in other words what exatly you want from life. a better question would be why were you born, what for?, do you think ending life would be the key to change life, No, I surmise even if you will born again, you would be so much diffreent from what you are now as you had got no idea in the essence of life, the mission you were born for, to ennjoy life.

[Stormie Sky]

This is another great poem. you also expressed what you think perfectly. I really like it. Great job :)

[Aehr]

I like the way you've expressed your views up. Good job.

[dw817]

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No, the world isn't there for us, we are there for the world, to shape it, shift it, carve it, and marvel it. And unlike us who number in the billions, there is only ONE Earth. It's up to us to take good care of it, for us and for our ancestors to come. :)

And we all play the game of being the fool. Some of us are better than others. Some of us are duped, and it does amuse others for a time. Some of us may feel that the only reason we are in the world is to serve as an example to others of what not to become.

But realize, we LEARN from our mistakes, we GROW in our compassion, and we SERVE to help others. Why ? The universe has a way of running that much better and faster when we do. I can't explain it except it is the GOOD PRINCIPLE. Be good and good things will happen all around you, I promise.

Just don't expect them all to happen to you. If you can remember that simple life lesson, you're gonna do just fine. :)

[Astro]

Good to see you expanding on your topics and trying out new styles Jason. Keep it up.

[It's Me, The Miracle]

Depiction of curiosity is done well....reading this none will stay uncurious about how to kill...ha ha ha

[Shane Mohamed]

I can usually tell when a piece of work is done out of inspiration or if it was done in a rush, and this definitely was driven by inspiration. You have equally stated the prose and cons of curiosity. I would refrain from the excessively lengthy lines though. excellent job Jason. Write on.

[Akashi]

Hah hah hah. Sometimes I'm so dumb I'm curious about how it feels to kill someone.

[TL Boehm]

Wise words friend. curiosity can be a double edged sword.