Curiosity

Curiosity

A Poem by CRZ

Curiosity 
this got the young boy killed.
it got that unprotected man ill.
this had gotten you to reach your full potential 
it made you realize what are lifes essential 
this made you realize that world isn't there for you
it made you think that no matter how red or how healthy your heart is 
   there is always space for ... blue
this made you tattoo it in your brain to never do it again
it got you neglecting everything negative including friends 
this got me winning millions of dollars of the lottery 
it got my attention & it was from the honest me
this got me thinking and on idle 
it got my emotions dialogue on recital 
this got the person discovering a new other side 
it has you on the passenger side , while the car asks
   "Are you ready to drive?"
this got a girl with huge whole in her heart
it got this world ruined from the start
it got this world so easy on hiding the truth 
this happens because we refused . get amused
                    and get duped! 
Now you know

© 2013 CRZ


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Good bit of street-wise philosophy going on there. Thanx for sharing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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I keep imagining you reading this and I love the flow and rhythm, another good poem :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Excellent wording and message here. Thought provoking to say the least.
Clever writing!

Posted 11 Years Ago


The emotions are intense in this one! One thing leads to another and the curious nature of the human being can be both bad and good. Makes a person think. I liked it. Lydi**

Posted 11 Years Ago


HAI
so many good points in here
I get to feeling this way
then i crumble my papers up
and throw them across the room
time to start over
or commit sebuku


Posted 11 Years Ago


That is seriously deep, sweetie. I love it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


The way you wrote this was really swell. It speaks more than truth, it speaks the mind. How we live every day. Swell, just swell. Pen on.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I really like the emotion in this and I felt every world as if it was speaking to me directly.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I really like the end, I never quite thought of curiosity as bad, except for cats! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Curiosity has taken out a lot of people! LOL I love how you constructed this poem. You kept it moving and had me intrigued through the whole poem. It was a great write!

Posted 11 Years Ago



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CRZ
CRZ

New York, NY



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