Show me what Love is

Save my heart

from falling

get me up

from your

lovely fishing rod

don't try to eat me

pet me

I am your love

I can be every where

around you

pet me with love

I will turn

to a bear

when you sleep

have a sweet dream

I will bring you up the moon

when you sleep

I only want to be with you

my love inside

was locked

now

it's opened

you got my key

my heart flew to you

since I saw you

my heart stays

never go away

love you forever

In my world

there's no love

no care

I want you to tell me

how love feels like

and show me

how love is done

I only feel that

when I am besides you

Never leave me

tell me

show me

how love's like

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Dalebear]

Good write

[Rhonda]

nice poem

[Kimberly]

Is this going to be a book of poetry or a book in poetry form. That would be interesting.

[YYPSNicoletse]

nice chapter!

[alan peter kelly]

it's beautiful...lovely and loyal to love....filled with sweet and fantastic imagery...and a natural flow that bears no dishamony upon my mind both as i read and after the poem had finished...it lingers now as i write this review...as a warm sensation inside my head...cool write...

[Undying Glory]

very good work, one of your best i'd say. i think you're really making good progress learning english here. wonderful

[Miss Coral]

Very delicately penned.. I would replace "how" in the last line with "what" for it to make more sense. Otherwise, I thought this was great. I especially liked the beginning. Nice write. :)

-Coral-

[Short.Nerd]

Good Job

[~Lizzy♬]

I loved this poem. The wordsflowed quite smoothly along and the dedication to this poem was very good.;)

[Revolved]

Very nice... Smoothed well... LOVE IT!! :D